[JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

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[JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by Brikthulhu » Fri Jul 19, 2019 5:11 pm

https://starfelix.smugmug.com/My-First-Gallery heres my entry :D

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Two turrets exchange fire
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A warrior climbs to the deck
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The battle on deck continues
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the Ones from Beyond arrive
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by stubby » Sun Jul 21, 2019 11:19 am

These images could use some captions to explain what's going on. I like the multicolor camouflage against the multicolor floor, smart.
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by Diamondsword901 » Sun Jul 21, 2019 11:47 am

That SHIP reminds me of mine, it’s really cool
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by Brikthulhu » Sun Jul 21, 2019 7:35 pm

thanks for the advice. I didnt do the camo on
Purpose but im glad you like it.

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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by Brikthulhu » Sun Jul 21, 2019 7:49 pm

There. added captions and accidentaly deleted a photo

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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by Kastrenzo » Fri Aug 02, 2019 9:57 pm

Style - 3
Substance - 3
Photography 4

The actual scenes and subject matter are fun but it's not explained at all what's going on or who any of these minifigs are. the substance of the build and background is too chaotic, I feel the substance and dim and out of focus photography kind of hurt each other
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by MadMario » Sat Aug 03, 2019 8:30 am

Style - 6 - good use of the parts you have, that`s the brikwars spirit

Substance - 5 - missing some details, and maybe a recognizable colour scheme would help to differ factions better

Photography - 4 - often too dark and a bit out of focus - it`s hard to follow whats going on here


Theme - 5 - maybe not referring actual events or characters(but that´s hard if you just started here, right?),
but very brikwarsy at all
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war

Post by aoffan23 » Sat Aug 17, 2019 1:24 pm

Style: 6
While it may not be stylish in the traditional sense, it definitely feels like Brikwars. Also the Mindstorms monster is pretty frightening.

Substance: 4
It's hard to fault someone for not having the briks to make cohesive stuff, but it is very rainbow. I do like that tank with the airplane cockpit.

Photography: 3
The lighting is pretty wonky, which I can't tell if it's an issue of using flash or just the room this is taken in. It would also probably be worth working on the framing of your shots, so that you avoid having extra blank space (unless it's intentional).

Theme: 3
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