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Rising terror in the south

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:14 am
by RunsWithLegos
FUCK. I meant to put this in the battle reports Section!
shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit

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"Hey Jim, have you heard of the 'Terrors' the peaches are now using?"

"Yeah. I herd one slaughtered four guys in, like three seconds!"

"Shut it you two. that's nuthin but Propoganda spread by traitor spys."

"Either way, it doesn't mater. All we have do do is reach the Coalition Beach head and we are home free."

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"Hey, does any one else hear a faint klank-"

KRA-KOOM!
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"WHAT THE?!?"

"AHHH! OH GOD HIS HEAD!!!"

"We got to get the fuck out of he-"


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DAKA DAKA DAKA!!

KRA-BOOM!!


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"Wha- what the hell?"


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KLANG KLANG KLANG

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"Any last words? You yellow scum."

"P-p-please! H-have mer-"


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DAKA DAKA!!


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"Area secure. Lets move out."


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so, good or bad?

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:15 am
by Silent-sigfig
better pics plz.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:27 am
by RunsWithLegos
the explosions and after explosion pics are suposed to be blurry.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:28 am
by Silent-sigfig
I'm talking about the actual terrors.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:32 am
by RunsWithLegos
Oh! okay:
only the yellow survivors call them that though, the peaches them selves call them JunkTrons
http://www.brikwars.com/forums/viewtopi ... 413#154413

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 1:28 am
by RunsWithLegos
You know what? i put a good amount  of prep time into the sploasions, then go blur the hell out of them... seems kinda dumb...

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:36 am
by trebnos1
^Agreed.
But I like your narration. Fun read! You should make a stealthy one with claws for that to make sense though.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:10 am
by Warhead
I like how you did this. Good work.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:56 am
by RunsWithLegos
trebnos1 wrote:^Agreed.
But I like your narration. Fun read! You should make a stealthy one with claws for that to make sense though.

For what to make sense? how the Junktrons snuck up on them?

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 10:59 am
by trebnos1
Actually, my bad. I interpreted the first explosion (and the subsequent flying head) as "sneaky-thing-just-ran-by-and-decapitated-me."

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:16 pm
by Darth Terminus
Now That Is Realy Good Trebnos!

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 5:59 pm
by RunsWithLegos
Darth Terminus wrote:Now That Is Realy Good Trebnos!



what?

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:18 pm
by Natalya
I'd move this to Battle Reports, but it's awesome and I like awesome stuff in my forum.  Discuss. :phil:

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 7:30 pm
by RunsWithLegos
I fear i might be turning in to a Peachist.

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 9:35 pm
by trebnos1
The Consortium discriminates only in competence. Of course, most of our troops are Yellows, so maybe there's something there...