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[MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:11 pm
by cleanupcrew
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:11 pm
by cleanupcrew
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:20 pm
by Quantumsurfer
Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:33 am
by Kalvinator
Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:46 am
by stubby
More like hyper-repressed rather than emotionless, I think.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:46 am
by Silverdream
Kalvinator wrote:Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...
Hatred is an emotion.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 1:46 am
by Zupponn
I find this amusing.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2013 10:50 pm
by pkbrennan
Quantumsurfer wrote:Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.
DO EET!

I rather enjoyed that little tale. :D

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:02 pm
by cleanupcrew
Just putting it out there for anyone potentially confused, but this is done.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 1:49 am
by Theblackdog
Minifigs: 3.5/5. Nothing really jumped out at me, but Scratch looked good. How *does* he fit his head inside a Death Mask?
Photography: 5/5 I saw everything I needed to see, and a couple things I can't unsee. But I won't take points off for those.
Writing: 4/5. Very well executed dialogue, and just enough exposition to keep us in the loop. But I felt like it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the whole story in on time, so I might as well do it here.
Title: 5/5. Rainbow references are always a plus when writing pwny stories.
Overall appeal: 4/5.

Total score: 21.5/25.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 7:30 am
by cleanupcrew
I personally have as a policy that my results are final so :idc: , but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 8:55 am
by Bragallot
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Hey! What is that guy in the back doing there?

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:25 am
by pkbrennan
Looks like the nasty, to me...

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:46 am
by Theblackdog
Colette wrote:I personally have as a policy that my results are final so :idc: , but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.
I dunno, it still kinda *felt* incomplete somehow. Still, what you have is good.

Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:42 pm
by Kalvinator
Quick question, what set did you get that guy in the blue suit?