Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby sahasrahla » Mon Apr 24, 2017 4:16 pm

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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby AnnoyedZebra » Tue Apr 25, 2017 1:36 am

This is a pretty good soap, but its a bit confusing
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Brikguy0410 » Tue Apr 25, 2017 11:20 am

AnnoyedZebra wrote:This is a pretty good soap, but its a bit confusing
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Captain-Camper » Tue Apr 25, 2017 2:18 pm

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Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai Episode 69 (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Archduke » Tue Apr 25, 2017 6:38 pm

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Mugen-no-ken: I don't need to explain anything.

Kōkatsu: You are a depressed Samurai who can literally just calmly bleed out and not care, THERE ARE SOME THINGS THAT NEED EXPLAINING!

Mugen-no-ken: Fine, I have a magic sword, and I let down my family a long time ago, now will you just leave.

Ajairu: Only if you help us.

Mugen-no-ken: Why?

Isan: It's a chance ad redemption.

a pause...

Mugen-no-ken: If you insist, how should I help you.

Ajairu: We are roaming the land in search of... well, I'm not sure. Usually, things happen to us.

Isan: We need someone to escort us,

Mugen-no-ken: You already...

Ajairu:  :fist:

Mugen-no-ken: (he breaks off) I am out of line, I shall ask no more questions and follow your leads.

The four exit...

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Space Admiral Perry: That's not good.

(scene change...)

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Masuku: So, you three are my best generals, and you wish to tell me that you have been unable to defeat the Shogunate armies, because of three semi-skilled Samurai?

...

Masuku: I'm not upset, just... disappointed. I have no intention for punishing slow work, but if no progress is made soon, the Emperor will be rather displeased.

...

Masuku: You three look so afraid, I don't blame you, I just think you need some higher quality troops...

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Masuku: Now, Kenkenkenkenkenkenken, you must deal with those three Samurai, make it your personal mission, and do not return until it is complete.
Shinkokuna, You must find Space Admiral Perry, see if he has the swordsman he was sent to find. Move quickly and I wish you the best of luck...
Happy hunting.

To Be Continued...
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Archduke » Tue Apr 25, 2017 6:40 pm

Quick P.S., The series is probably too far in for me to effectively add robots, (we were 3 people away)
Also, Samurai would sometimes change alliances if they were offered better pay, that could be the reason that Shinkokuna is now serving Masuku.

Sorry if this soap is confusing, just ask if you need something clarified, and I will try to explain it in a comment or episode.
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Brikguy0410 » Wed Apr 26, 2017 12:04 pm

what we need is background/context, and we have none. where is this? what is this war that seems to be going on? why did it start? etc- without world building you can't have a story.
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby AnnoyedZebra » Wed Apr 26, 2017 12:14 pm

Brikguy0410 wrote:what we need is background/context, and we have none. where is this? what is this war that seems to be going on? why did it start? etc- without world building you can't have a story.

It seems to be based on [url="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boshin_War"]the boshin war[/url]
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Archduke » Wed Apr 26, 2017 4:02 pm

Brikguy0410 wrote:what we need is background/context, and we have none. where is this? what is this war that seems to be going on? why did it start? etc- without world building you can't have a story.

The backstory is in the thread: Names needed for new project
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Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai Episode 7 (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Archduke » Wed Apr 26, 2017 4:14 pm

Episode 7; Masuku vs. the Ninja Guard

Masuku arrives on the grounds of the Shogun's palace, He has exhausted many of his resources, and now he has been sent bu the Emperor to assassinate the shogun.

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He is surrounded by the Shogun's personal ninja guard...

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He leaps into action...

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Masuku drops upon the first ninja with a mighty thrust...

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He quickly shifts his weight, launching into a mighty spin, his sword slashing and nearly bisecting the second ninja...

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However, the Samurai fails to evade the ninja captain, and he pays for his mistake...

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Masuku: uuuhhhhhnnnuuuh...

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To Be Continued...

(less talk more action this episode. Tell me if you like this, or if you want me to go back to the old formula.)
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Duerer » Wed Apr 26, 2017 4:45 pm

Brikguy0410 wrote:without world building you can't have a story.


Is it really the case though? I thought world building only refers to background information that's mostly optional to the story told, rather than the actual context of the story one tries to convey.
World building might be helpful to flesh out the story, as long as the given additional information is contributing to the understanding of a story.
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Steel_Valkyrie » Wed Apr 26, 2017 5:01 pm

I just noticed this.
Space. Admiral. Perry.
I fucking love it.
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby AnnoyedZebra » Thu Apr 27, 2017 12:43 am

Steel_Valkyrie wrote:I just noticed this.
Space. Admiral. Perry.
I fucking love it.

I like how he's been promoted from commodore in this world
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Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai Episode 8 (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Archduke » Thu Apr 27, 2017 6:14 pm

Episode 8: The Wheels Turn
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Shogun: I see your plight Samurai, but you do know that if the Emperor is killed, there is no one to stop you.

Masuku: With all due humility, I cannot fight for you, I am held by my honor not to break a promise.

Shogun: I understand, but you win either way. All you need to do is end the war.

Masuku: Are you asking me to kill you?

Shogun: No, although I know that you are fully capable of doing so now, but you are held by your honor here too. I simply ask a favor, seeing as how you have captures or killed some of my best soldiers.

Masuku: And what might that be?

Shogun: Send word to the Emperor, that we are to meet on the plains of the great stalemate, over-morrow at dawn, with all of our forces, and we shall settle this, once and for all; But you keep your forces out of this affair Samurai. Give me your word, or I will execute you now.

Masuku: You have my word.

Shogun: Then it is settled, you have already won.

(Scene Change...)

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Kenkenkenkenkenkenken: Surrender now fools! We have you surrounded!

Kōkatsu: Well this is underwhelming.

Mugen-no-ken: Let's wipe these peasants up and continue on our way.

Kenkenkenkenkenkenken: UNDERWHELMING!?! PEASANTS!?!! HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!

A messenger monk enters...

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Monk:.... ..... ..... .....
(It's not like you don't know what he's saying. It's about the battle mentioned earlier in the episode.)

Kenkenkenkenkenkenken: We are too strong to waste time on you! C'mon soldiers, regroup!

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The soldiers flee.

Kōkatsu: What was that all about?

Ajairu: They ran away.

Mugen-no-ken: A fight without fighting is still a fight worth fighting.

Kōkatsu: What does that mean?

Mugen-no-ken: It means; never pay someone for advice.

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To Be Continued...
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Re: Mahō no samurai bōken notatakai (魔法の侍冒険の戦い)

Postby Darkstorm » Fri Apr 28, 2017 4:47 pm

This is great!
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