[WORK-IN-PROGRESS] Battle of Altai Sector Poster

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[WORK-IN-PROGRESS] Battle of Altai Sector Poster

Postby beluga » Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:10 pm

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I need to add enemy ships and explosions, but all Nyphilian ships have been integrated into the background. I want everyone to give me their suggestions as to what the enemy fleet should consist of (NSST, Immortals, Tyronians, etc) and in what proportion. My first attempt at this kind of stuff, I hope I haven't failed too horribly.
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Postby Hoboman » Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:12 pm

I would rethink the number of ships and size of them. If the ships block too much of the backgrond it ruins the impact and effect.

Drop two of your ships out of the picture, drop one down to half the size it is now. Then only add three at most enemy ships.

That is my .02
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Postby Jbgarrison » Mon Feb 21, 2011 10:58 pm

I am in agreement with Hobo; good critique.
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