[WORK-IN-PROGRESS] Battle of Altai Sector Poster

[beluga]

I need to add enemy ships and explosions, but all Nyphilian ships have been integrated into the background. I want everyone to give me their suggestions as to what the enemy fleet should consist of (NSST, Immortals, Tyronians, etc) and in what proportion. My first attempt at this kind of stuff, I hope I haven't failed too horribly.

[Hoboman]

I would rethink the number of ships and size of them. If the ships block too much of the backgrond it ruins the impact and effect.

Drop two of your ships out of the picture, drop one down to half the size it is now. Then only add three at most enemy ships.

That is my .02

[Jbgarrison]

I am in agreement with Hobo; good critique.