So, me and bud of mine are having some difficulties forming a band, yet we already have some original work and some covers being developed. Our first original is a song I wrote called "Generation Kill". We are still getting trough riffs and overall musical work, but things are coming together. We will record it once the KORG Mini Pandora is available in music stores.
Here are the lyrics, hope you guys feel something, I was totally focused, it basically wrote itself up...
WIP
Rhythm: about 160 bpms
Generation Kill
By Bernardo "Fenix" Silva (Rhythm guitarist and Vocals) and "Petre" Duarte (Lead guitarist)
WIP introduction
Guitar#1n2
Damnation
At your door, fallout eminent
Salvation
Now long lost, flew with the wind
Predation
Forever more, preys of false gods
Generation
Cursed at birth, all the pain they brought
Riff#1
What happened to this Generation?
Where is the sweat, blood and tears?
Taught by violence shaped by fear
Made to Kill
Riff#2
WIP riff
Generation Kill
Generation Kill
Generation Kill, Kill, Kill, yeah
Guitar#1n2
Body
Fake, unpure. Manufactured
Soul
Insane, not free. Prefabricate
World
Utopia, unreachable desire
Man
All spent shell, cartridge burnt trough fire
Riff#1
Riff#2
Guitar#1n2
God's
Will undone, where is he now?
Seal
Forged by war, the beast of flame
Mind
Playing tricks, your puppet I am not
Memory
Scars so deep, my reality
Riff#1
Riff#2
SOLO
Riff#2
WIP ending
C&C would be much appreciated and taken in mind!