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Movie poster

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:14 pm
by mr.duckie
Image

I made a movie poster To put outside the theater I'm building, I think it turned out pretty well.
All done in illustrator.

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:17 pm
by Thesson
For a civilian scenery I applaud you

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 10:53 pm
by Blitzen
It's broken.

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:00 pm
by BFenix
Blitzen wrote:It's broken.

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:14 pm
by mr.duckie
Fixed, I Knew using google drive was too good to be true.

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 11:30 pm
by Thesson
MWAHAHA! I was able to see it using the power of:

CHROME!!!!

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:00 am
by Blitzen
Thesson wrote:MWAHAHA! I was able to see it using the power of:

CHROME!!!!

I also use Chrome, but the image wasn't working. It is now though.

mr. duckie:
I like it. The layout is nice, and it manages to convey a lot despite the simplification of images. One thing: the glasses should behind the right hand, not in front. It looks a bit wonky the way you have it.

You might want to look into a variety of typefaces instead of just the one; it' a bit illegible at small size. I'd suggest keeping the title the way it is, but changing the rest to a simpler sans-serif.

Good job!

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:05 am
by mr.duckie
Blitzen wrote:
Thesson wrote:MWAHAHA! I was able to see it using the power of:

CHROME!!!!

I also use Chrome, but the image wasn't working. It is now though.

mr. duckie:
I like it. The layout is nice, and it manages to convey a lot despite the simplification of images. One thing: the glasses should behind the right hand, not in front. It looks a bit wonky the way you have it.

You might want to look into a variety of typefaces instead of just the one; it' a bit illegible at small size. I'd suggest keeping the title the way it is, but changing the rest to a simpler sans-serif.

Good job!


I noticed the glasses thing, there was a mix up with things being on the wrong layers, so I decided that it wouldn't really matter because The final print is two inches high.

I also had "Only use one font." drilled into my head in graphic design class.

Thanks for the feedback!

Re: Movie poster

PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2012 12:07 am
by Thesson
Oh. I don't know what happened to you guys then.