SYDER COMM NAVY
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With the Immortal War fast approaching it's zenith the Chairmen of Syder Communications realize that to even their relatively quite corner of the galaxy will soon be aflame with unending bloodshed. To protect their assets they have put out a mandate to the forge world of Vi'Keen to produce mighty warships and craft a navy sufficent to defend and take new teritories but not draw attention from the local super powers.
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The VendorHeavy Freighter
These ships were the Most numerous and still are large ships* of the navy. This small ship has Large cargo areas[enough to house one Detachment of the Army**] Medium armor, one heavy plasma cannon and a plasma turret.
Though well made and reliable, they are not war ships.
*bigger then a gun ship
** the pic in my Syder Comm Army thread is a detatchment.
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and that is where the two newest ships come in:
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The ADVOCATE Destroyer.
The ADVOCATE class is armed and armored, being geared toward offense with multiple LANC lazer batteries, a heavy plasma cannon and a Psalmodic Defiler cannon
It too can hold up to a Detachment of the Army, as well as 2 wings of fighters.
But a Sword with out a Shield is weak.
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The MERCHENT class battleship
These mighty ships are to be the Back Bone of the New Navy. Fortified with mighty Entropy Shields and meter thick Unvubtainum Armor plates these ships are fortresses. And for the task of dealing damage A Photonic Response main cannon backed by multiple LANC batteries, a heavy plasma cannon, many plasma turrets and a wing of fighters are more then sufficient to deal with almost any threat present in the sector.
These ships can hold two full Detachments of the Army.
SYDER COMM [micro]NAVY
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Re: SYDER COMM [micro]NAVY
There are a number of capitalizations that don't look right but I'm gonna go ahead and say that it's intentional so I don't have to go and fix em all.RunsWithLegos wrote:SYDER COMM NAVY
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With the Immortal War fast approaching it's zenith, the Chairmen of Syder Communications realize that even their relatively quite corner of the galaxy will soon be aflame with unending bloodshed. To protect their assets they have put out a mandate to the forge world of Vi'Keen to produce mighty warships and craft a navy sufficient to defend and take new territories but not draw attention from the local super powers.
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The VendorHeavy Freighter
These ships were the most numerous and still are the primary large ships* of the navy. This small ship has a large cargo area[enough to house one Detachment of the Army**] Medium armor, one heavy plasma cannon and a plasma turret.
Though well made and reliable, they are not war ships.
*bigger then a gun ship
** the pic in my Syder Comm Army thread is a detachment.
<<o>>
and that is where the two newest ships come in:
<<o>>
The ADVOCATE Destroyer.
The ADVOCATE class is armed and armored, being geared toward offense with multiple LANC lazer(I hope this is intentional) batteries, a heavy plasma cannon and a Psalmodic Defiler cannon
It too can hold up to a Detachment of the Army, as well as 2 wings of fighters.
But a Sword without a Shield is weak.
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The MERCHENT class battleship Do you perhaps mean Merchant?
These mighty ships are to be the Back Bone of the New Navy. Fortified with mighty Entropy Shields and meter thick Unvubtainum(unobtainum?) Armor plates, these ships are fortresses. (Sentences do not start with and)And for the task of dealing damage a Photonic Response main cannon backed by multiple LANC batteries, a heavy plasma cannon, many plasma turrets and a wing of fighters are more then sufficient to deal with almost any threat present in the sector.(Run-on sentence, add commas or break up)
These ships can hold two full Detachments of the Army.
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Re: SYDER COMM [micro]NAVY
RunsWithLegos wrote:SYDER COMM NAVY
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With the Immortal War fast approaching it's zenith the Chairmen of Syder Communications realize that to even their relatively quite corner of the galaxy will soon be aflame with unending bloodshed. To protect their assets they have put out a mandate to the forge world of Vi'Keen to produce mighty warships and craft a navy sufficent to defend and take new teritories but not draw attention from the local super powers.
<<o>>
The VendorHeavy Freighter
These ships were the Most numerous and still are large ships* of the navy. This small ship has Large cargo areas[enough to house one Detachment of the Army**] Medium armor, one heavy plasma cannon and a plasma turret.
Though well made and reliable, they are not war ships.
*bigger then a gun ship
** the pic in my Syder Comm Army thread is a detatchment.
<<o>>
and that is where the two newest ships come in:
<<o>>
The ADVOCATE Destroyer.
The ADVOCATE class is armed and armored, being geared toward offense with multiple LANC lazer batteries, a heavy plasma cannon and a Psalmodic Defiler cannon
It too can hold up to a Detachment of the Army, as well as 2 wings of fighters.
But a Sword with out a Shield is weak.
<<o>>
The MERCHENT class Destroyer
These mighty ships are to be the Back Bone of the New Navy. Fortified with mighty Entropy Shields and meter thick Unvubtainum Armor plates these ships are fortresses. And for the task of dealing damage A Photonic Response main cannon backed by multiple LANC batteries, a heavy plasma cannon, many plasma turrets and a wing of fighters are more then sufficient to deal with almost any threat present in the sector.
These ships can hold two full Detachments of the Army.
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Nice ships! The Merchent is my favorite of the three.
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Re: SYDER COMM [micro]NAVY
THanks mate! i am going to revamp the navy as soon as i can, but i must ask, what brought you back 7 pages or more to comment on this thread?