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Postby Magic Soap » Sat Mar 05, 2011 7:05 pm

Mainly metalcore stuff with the exception of Enter Shikari... and a lot of god-awful emopop/:fu: THEYMUSTBEBURNED :fu:
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Postby BFenix » Mon May 09, 2011 2:50 pm

HELLZ YEAH! :twisted:

Late celebration, doesn't matter, got my hands on the MXR Fullbore Metal pedal! And my bud bought his Korg Mini Pandora for overall guitar FXs and digital recording!

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Im telling you guys, these little fellas are a beast! Mainly my pedal of course. But seriously, I gotta make a loop of just the distortion diving in, blows your head off.

So, today we finished classes and tested our new gear right away using the Pandora and Audacity 1.3 Beta program, results were quite good for an uncoordinated amateur jam session. You can listen to the crappy sound testing and overall frequency, volume and noise adjustments made while playing if you click the link: http://www.mediafire.com/?0x2a9r1yquqq0oa

Now we are working in our covers, originals and coops (yes your song is included here Olly), expect some stuff soon!
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Postby Olothontor » Mon May 09, 2011 4:25 pm

This sounds just like what kidko and I do. Just the tiniest bit off-beat most of the time, but when we click, we click well.

Looking forward to the polished, non-jam stuff. :wink:
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Postby BFenix » Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:26 pm

Olly, I worked a bit on lyrics for "Through Every Storm". I know your setting was more of a stempunkish sky armada, but I deviated a little, if thats ok. These are still just a few roughs, not even worked on the tune although its more or less in my mind...

Away sailed the chosen
To the unknown seas
With scattering thoughts
Of whom they're bound to be

Temptation and Dreams
In their hearts are sown
Back to platinum shores
Through Every Storm

As they ride the storm of ages
Their light seizes to be
It runs down extinguished
Conquered by the sea

Forever, in siege
By the oceans of the world
The true fire burns on
Through Every Storm



So, what do you think?
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Postby Silverdream » Fri Aug 19, 2011 10:17 pm

BFenix wrote:Olly, I worked a bit on lyrics for "Through Every Storm". I know your setting was more of a stempunkish sky armada, but I deviated a little, if thats ok. These are still just a few roughs, not even worked on the tune although its more or less in my mind...

Away sailed the chosen
To the unknown seas
With scattering thoughts
Of whom they're bound to be

Temptation and Dreams
In their hearts are sown
Back to platinum shores
Through Every Storm

As they ride the storm of ages
Their light ceases to be
It runs down extinguished
Conquered by the sea

Forever, in siege
By the oceans of the world
The true fire burns on
Through Every Storm



So, what do you think?


Besides the spelling mistake, it's alright.
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Postby BFenix » Thu Oct 13, 2011 8:13 am

Silverdream wrote:Besides the spelling mistake, it's alright.


Thanks silvy, also, bumping this as an attempt to get Oloth's attention. We're working on this again.
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Postby Silverdream » Thu Oct 13, 2011 9:53 am

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Postby Olothontor » Thu Oct 13, 2011 12:58 pm

Oh, sweet! I like it, I look forward to whatever you guys do with it. I'll do a softer cover of it, haha.
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Postby BFenix » Thu Oct 13, 2011 1:05 pm

Olothontor wrote:Oh, sweet! I like it, I look forward to whatever you guys do with it. I'll do a softer cover of it, haha.


Oh, actually we're aiming for a soft one in Through Every Storm. Perhaps a simple riff with some "soft" distortion or something but definitely nothing to heavy.
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Postby Olothontor » Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:12 pm

BFenix wrote:
Olothontor wrote:Oh, sweet! I like it, I look forward to whatever you guys do with it. I'll do a softer cover of it, haha.


Oh, actually we're aiming for a soft one in Through Every Storm. Perhaps a simple riff with some "soft" distortion or something but definitely nothing to heavy.


I think I may be able to help. I'll throw up some tabs of what I've got running through my head, if you don't already have a riff in mind.

http://pastebin.com/F4T3C16e There you go. I play it nice and slow, with emphasis on the two lowest notes in the arpeggio. See how you like it (I'll record an example of it, if you like).
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Re: BFenix's Garage Corner: UPDATED 18/Aug

Postby BFenix » Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:51 pm

The Fall of Fico WIP
A tribute, requiem-thing about the Fico's fall and BFenix's "betrayal"

CHARGE!
The invasion begins, dark ships cloak out of nowhere
Swarms of deadly machinery blacken the sky
Say your last rites, Fico, you are mine!

ETA- RIGHT NOW!
Soldier's boots hit the ground
Massive treads crawl the fields, their death casting out
Hearts, pumping loud await at the Red Walls

TROOPERS!
Our time is now! The Red Wall must not fall
Unleash your anger down their ranks
Feel your weapon's furious pound

*battle ensues*

An orange transparent sight
Lit up Fico's night
As the bodies of fallen
Burn

Out on the silent fields of hate
Many met their fate
As Immortals roared
Gloriously

But while victory was heard
And spread through out the land
All but one
Lay down in thought

As he heard their people cry
As he saw their children die
His, Heart of steel
Got soft
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Re: BFenix's Garage Corner: UPDATED 18/Aug

Postby Keldoclock » Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:56 pm

dark ships cloak out of the darkness- kinda lame and messes up the flow

Soldier's boots work better than Warrior's boots.
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Re: BFenix's Garage Corner: UPDATED 18/Aug

Postby BFenix » Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:01 pm

Keldoclock wrote:dark ships cloak out of the darkness- kinda lame and messes up the flow

Soldier's boots work better than Warrior's boots.


Agreed on the second critic. Fix'd.

As for the first one, it really depends on how your singing it and in what tempo, it is also supposed to be a fast and heavy version while it slows down after the battle.

EDIT: Oh right, slow fuck, dark-darkness. Nevermind. Also fix'd, thanks.
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