I live to dream

[Silverdream]

I live To Dream.
The wakening moment is spent yearning,
for the blissful embrace of night.

Even as the day churns slowly through
and i slog step after step hopelessly reconstructing the swiftly shattering gleams of ever-after
shoving together mismatched shards
throwing up support after support and in attempt to ward of the quakes of consciousness
reverberating from the first crack of wordily recognition till the final whisper before the fall.

Into the sublime subconscious and a thousand new worlds each more real then my own.
but as if in taunt this all slips away in but a flash,
shoving me back into the froth and mist of the world out side
step by step i slog through anger, stress and injury
all for but a glimpse into the only light i know in the engulfing abyss of mortality

[Keldoclock]

Your poem is like
Something that a teenager
would scribble lol

[Silent-sigfig]

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Your poetry sucks.
Go banhammer yourself.

[Silverdream]

Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.

[Zupponn]

[RunsWithLegos]

I akm pretty sure that is my poem...

edit: yep, word for word mine

http://bobdd0.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d34fz1t

[Silverdream]

I akm pretty sure that is my poem...

edit: yep, word for word mine

http://bobdd0.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d34fz1t

Yep, found it on the fifth page of artwork.

[RunsWithLegos]

indeed, and yeah i was a bit of a whiney bitch when i wrote that.

[Silverdream]

indeed, and yeah i was a bit of a teenager when i wrote that.

Fix'd for truth.

[Arkbrik]

I live To Dream.
The wakening moment is spent yearning,
for the blissful embrace of night.

Even as the day churns slowly through
and i slog step after step hopelessly reconstructing the swiftly shattering gleams of ever-after
shoving together mismatched shards
throwing up support after support and in attempt to ward of the quakes of consciousness
reverberating from the first crack of wordily recognition till the final whisper before the fall.

Into the sublime subconscious and a thousand new worlds each more real then my own.
but as if in taunt this all slips away in but a flash,
shoving me back into the froth and mist of the world out side
step by step i slog through anger, stress and injury
all for but a glimpse into the only light i know in the engulfing abyss of mortality

The opening paragraph gets you excited but then it's just a lot of boring talk about how reality sucks. Needs more dreams.

Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.

This is pretty hot. Who wrote it?

[Silverdream]

I actually did write the second one in about ten seconds flat.

[RunsWithLegos]

hmmm

you have a point arkbrik, i may rewrite it soon.

[Keldoclock]

Gaze upon my marble complexion
And fall in love with my still perfection
I am a maid of stone shaped by hands
Skilled hands
All over my body.

This is pretty hot. Who wrote it?

Prime opportunity for a new rank title here.

[Predator]

I actually did write the second one in about ten seconds flat.

[GeneralOfDeath]

If he made it 20% cooler, I might bother to read it.