[MS] Over the Rainbow

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[MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by cleanupcrew » Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:11 pm

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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Quantumsurfer » Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:20 pm

Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.

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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Kalvinator » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:33 am

Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by stubby » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:46 am

More like hyper-repressed rather than emotionless, I think.
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Silverdream » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:46 am

Kalvinator wrote:Very nice. Trattoria is supposed to be like the Daleks of the brikwars universe right, no emotion all that.... I actually just got an idea...
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Zupponn » Mon Feb 18, 2013 1:46 am

I find this amusing.
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by pkbrennan » Mon Feb 18, 2013 10:50 pm

Quantumsurfer wrote:Delightful. I expect I'll be putting rainbow transparent in the wiki soon.
DO EET!

I rather enjoyed that little tale. :D
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by cleanupcrew » Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:02 pm

Just putting it out there for anyone potentially confused, but this is done.

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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Theblackdog » Fri Feb 22, 2013 1:49 am

Minifigs: 3.5/5. Nothing really jumped out at me, but Scratch looked good. How *does* he fit his head inside a Death Mask?
Photography: 5/5 I saw everything I needed to see, and a couple things I can't unsee. But I won't take points off for those.
Writing: 4/5. Very well executed dialogue, and just enough exposition to keep us in the loop. But I felt like it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the whole story in on time, so I might as well do it here.
Title: 5/5. Rainbow references are always a plus when writing pwny stories.
Overall appeal: 4/5.

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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by cleanupcrew » Fri Feb 22, 2013 7:30 am

I personally have as a policy that my results are final so :idc: , but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.

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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Bragallot » Fri Feb 22, 2013 8:55 am

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Hey! What is that guy in the back doing there?
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by pkbrennan » Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:25 am

Looks like the nasty, to me...
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Theblackdog » Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:46 am

Colette wrote:I personally have as a policy that my results are final so :idc: , but this is the entire story. There were no plans for more- I had to do this whole thing in like three hours.
I dunno, it still kinda *felt* incomplete somehow. Still, what you have is good.
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Re: [MS] Over the Rainbow

Post by Kalvinator » Fri Feb 22, 2013 11:42 pm

Quick question, what set did you get that guy in the blue suit?
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