[MS] General Blut's Second Wave
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[MS] General Blut's Second Wave
This is part one. Part two should be up tomorrow.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave
He's just going to keep trying to kill the Pwnies, isn't he? This should be fun! What happens next?
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave
When will part 2 be up so I can judge this report?
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I've been really busy lately, but I'll try to get it up as soon as possible.
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Well, according to my timezone, you have 3 hours remaining to get up the second half or else I will have to judge as is.Silverdream wrote:I've been really busy lately, but I'll try to get it up as soon as possible.
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Won't be completed for a while. I'm entering this as-is.
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@Silva: I have put my judgement in a spoiler and ask that you do not read it on your honor until you have judged my own SOB.
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Photography: 2.5/5
Photos consistently blurry and dark, impedes ability to observe what is going on.
Minifigs: 4.5/5
Minifigs are original but not stunning nor necessarily aesthetically pleasing.
Writing: 3.5/5
I can’t believe I gave this an equal writing score as When Diplomacy Fails, which was overall written much better, but I think a part of it is the fact that there is no “writing” to speak of, only dialogue. Dialogue would have been considered poorly written but in this context is actually quite authentic. I deducted points for the usage of LOL in spoken dialogue though.
Title: 5/5
Again, what can I say?
Overall Appeal: 3/5
Presented poorly and did not appeal to me. Lack of effort seems evident.
Total Score: 3.8
Photos consistently blurry and dark, impedes ability to observe what is going on.
Minifigs: 4.5/5
Minifigs are original but not stunning nor necessarily aesthetically pleasing.
Writing: 3.5/5
I can’t believe I gave this an equal writing score as When Diplomacy Fails, which was overall written much better, but I think a part of it is the fact that there is no “writing” to speak of, only dialogue. Dialogue would have been considered poorly written but in this context is actually quite authentic. I deducted points for the usage of LOL in spoken dialogue though.
Title: 5/5
Again, what can I say?
Overall Appeal: 3/5
Presented poorly and did not appeal to me. Lack of effort seems evident.
Total Score: 3.8
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Photography: 2.5/5. Blurry and dark, and the speech bubbles often got in the way of the action.
Minifigs: 5/5. General Blut looks fabulous as always, and Buzzsaw and Panter were cool too.
Writing: 4/5. Some great lines, but it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the full story in.
Title: 4.5/5. It works, but it's not great.
Overall Appeal: 4/5.
total score: 20/25.
Minifigs: 5/5. General Blut looks fabulous as always, and Buzzsaw and Panter were cool too.
Writing: 4/5. Some great lines, but it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the full story in.
Title: 4.5/5. It works, but it's not great.
Overall Appeal: 4/5.
total score: 20/25.
Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave
I want to see Part 2.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave
It, and part three can come tomorrow maybe.Arkbrik wrote:I want to see Part 2.
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Minifigs: 5/5 Very good, loved all of them.
Photography: 3/5 I liked the comic book style but in the end it hindered your photos.
Writing: 3/5 Good story but not the best
Title: 4/5 It was an ok tittle
Overall appeal: 4/5
Total score: 19/25
Photography: 3/5 I liked the comic book style but in the end it hindered your photos.
Writing: 3/5 Good story but not the best
Title: 4/5 It was an ok tittle
Overall appeal: 4/5
Total score: 19/25
You are faced with door what do you do
I use my flamethrower
wait what you can't do that
Sure I can see
*door catches fire*
I use my flamethrower
wait what you can't do that
Sure I can see
*door catches fire*
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave
If your wondering why a bunch of the defenders are wearing Mando helmets it's because they're the fabled Dandalorians.
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