Bad Memories
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Bad Memories
Following “An Old Friend”
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Location:
High orbit of Planet Akurr (Fleurdelys system).
Spacecraft Galaxy main hallway.
Nadia: “About that promotion.. I want you to know that I'm happy for you.”
Syd: “Nadia.. Listen.”
Nadia: “No! It's allright. I think you deserve it and-”
The sliding sound of an opening door interrupts their conversation.
First Officer: “We have reach the target location and are ready to proceed for extraction on your order.”
Syd: “I'll get ready with the troops while you land.”
Nadia was silent. She watched Syd leave the room for the main deck then she headed for the bridge.
Pilot: “This is not a very good area for a landing. The closest suitable site is more than five hundred studs away from the target.”
Nadia: “That will have to do. We will walk from there.”
The soldiers were getting ready for deployment.
Syd: “Squads will cover each other. This is unknown territory so keep your eyes open.”
After a long walk, they were now in range of the site.
Operator: “No threat detected and temperature is stable. All sensors green.”
The group headed for the largest structure.
Operator: “OT readings are increasing as we get closer to the pyramid”
Syd: “Patrol around this area. You two guard the entrance.”
Nadia: “Nadia to Galaxy. We are entering the pyramid”
Syd: “What is all this for?”
Syd: “Wait!”
Nadia opened the sarcophagus.
“Orange Transparent”
The radio received a communication from the pilot: “This is Flyer-1 reporting activity.”
Radio Officer: “We are listening flyer-1”
Pilot: “All the torches lit up.”
Nadia: “Let's get this over with.”
Portals activate as Nadia grabs the artifact.
The radio received another communication from the pilot: “We are under attack!”
The obelisk fired a powerful OT beam at the interceptor.
Objective: Bring the artifact back to the Galaxy.
TURN 1
Aliens started to appears inside the portals.
Nadia gave the artifact to the Medik and took back her equipment.
The interceptor was taking heavy OT fire.
One Rider teleports on the altar.
Soldier: “Open fire!”
TURN 2
Nadia: “Blow up the portals!”
Two aliens were killed but the rocket missed..
..and triggered a chain reaction.
One soldier was infected by neurotoxin.
Flyer-1 has sustained heavy damage from the obelisks and is crashing.
Another rider is killed as he appeared on the altar.
A carrier infects one.
TURN 3
Syd: “Get out of the pyramid!!”
The soldier carrying the rocket launcher was killed.
Outside, the infected and one soldier were killed.
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Location:
High orbit of Planet Akurr (Fleurdelys system).
Spacecraft Galaxy main hallway.
Nadia: “About that promotion.. I want you to know that I'm happy for you.”
Syd: “Nadia.. Listen.”
Nadia: “No! It's allright. I think you deserve it and-”
The sliding sound of an opening door interrupts their conversation.
First Officer: “We have reach the target location and are ready to proceed for extraction on your order.”
Syd: “I'll get ready with the troops while you land.”
Nadia was silent. She watched Syd leave the room for the main deck then she headed for the bridge.
Pilot: “This is not a very good area for a landing. The closest suitable site is more than five hundred studs away from the target.”
Nadia: “That will have to do. We will walk from there.”
The soldiers were getting ready for deployment.
Syd: “Squads will cover each other. This is unknown territory so keep your eyes open.”
After a long walk, they were now in range of the site.
Operator: “No threat detected and temperature is stable. All sensors green.”
The group headed for the largest structure.
Operator: “OT readings are increasing as we get closer to the pyramid”
Syd: “Patrol around this area. You two guard the entrance.”
Nadia: “Nadia to Galaxy. We are entering the pyramid”
Syd: “What is all this for?”
Syd: “Wait!”
Nadia opened the sarcophagus.
“Orange Transparent”
The radio received a communication from the pilot: “This is Flyer-1 reporting activity.”
Radio Officer: “We are listening flyer-1”
Pilot: “All the torches lit up.”
Nadia: “Let's get this over with.”
Portals activate as Nadia grabs the artifact.
The radio received another communication from the pilot: “We are under attack!”
The obelisk fired a powerful OT beam at the interceptor.
Objective: Bring the artifact back to the Galaxy.
TURN 1
Aliens started to appears inside the portals.
Nadia gave the artifact to the Medik and took back her equipment.
The interceptor was taking heavy OT fire.
One Rider teleports on the altar.
Soldier: “Open fire!”
TURN 2
Nadia: “Blow up the portals!”
Two aliens were killed but the rocket missed..
..and triggered a chain reaction.
One soldier was infected by neurotoxin.
Flyer-1 has sustained heavy damage from the obelisks and is crashing.
Another rider is killed as he appeared on the altar.
A carrier infects one.
TURN 3
Syd: “Get out of the pyramid!!”
The soldier carrying the rocket launcher was killed.
Outside, the infected and one soldier were killed.
Last edited by BrickSyd on Sun Jun 02, 2013 5:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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TURN 4
The alien mount was killed but the rider survived.
The combined effort of both Mediks revived one soldier.
The Heavy Infantry was doing well but enemies kept coming from the portals.
Nadia: “We're going to be overrun if we don't take these portals down.”
Niav looked at the battlefield and issued orders to the troops:
“Form the ranks! We are holding this position.”
TURN 5
Then he spoke to Nadia.
“I will hold them here while you shut down the first portal. Take your squad, flank them from the right side and meet me in the middle.”
“Be careful.”
TURN 6
The squads separated.
The infected Trooper got out of the pyramid and attacked.
The pilot who died in the crash is critically revived.
Overwatch after 6 turns.
TURN 7
The pilot who survived the crash had to redshirt.
Two aliens down.
The heavy trooper continued to fight and made its fourth kill.
Nadia: “Get ready..”
After some pointless movement, the lost mount finally ran away from the battlefield.
TURN 8
The defenders were losing ground.
Nadia's Team was on the move.
TURN 9
Nadia: “They haven't seen us..”
Nadia looked at the battlefield.
“There's too many of them and too few of us. It's over.”
“We can't risk the artifact.”
The artifact has been recovered. Mission objective completed.
-End of entry-
Conclusion
Major Natalya: “So you just left them there.”
Nadia: “An aerial intervention was out of the question because of the obelisks and-.”
Natalya interrupts her.
“Yes, of course.. And the Black Bird. What is it?”
Nadia: “The Black Bird was supposed to be the symbol of Noxar power but the project was way too ambitious. It required everything to be redesigned: Engines, landing gears, weaponry,... It was a fantasy from the start. Titan Starship ended up losing a ton of money and the Ship was never build.
Natalya: “One last thing. What was Niav promoted to?”
Nadia looked at the window briefly before answering.
“Captain of the Galaxy..”
Major Natalya: “Well played.”
Natalya:“We're done here. Get back to the Ship.”
The Assyrians left the Galaxy.
Nadia: “ I don't trust her. Get ready to move!”
First Officer: “Captain. We have received a communication from the supervisor. You are to report immediately to Deep Space Management headquarter.”
Nadia: “You look formal..”
Natalya: “Report.”
Officer: “We gained access to their main computer but we will need some time to hack all the data.”
Natalya: “Excellent.”
The end!
The alien mount was killed but the rider survived.
The combined effort of both Mediks revived one soldier.
The Heavy Infantry was doing well but enemies kept coming from the portals.
Nadia: “We're going to be overrun if we don't take these portals down.”
Niav looked at the battlefield and issued orders to the troops:
“Form the ranks! We are holding this position.”
TURN 5
Then he spoke to Nadia.
“I will hold them here while you shut down the first portal. Take your squad, flank them from the right side and meet me in the middle.”
“Be careful.”
TURN 6
The squads separated.
The infected Trooper got out of the pyramid and attacked.
The pilot who died in the crash is critically revived.
Overwatch after 6 turns.
TURN 7
The pilot who survived the crash had to redshirt.
Two aliens down.
The heavy trooper continued to fight and made its fourth kill.
Nadia: “Get ready..”
After some pointless movement, the lost mount finally ran away from the battlefield.
TURN 8
The defenders were losing ground.
Nadia's Team was on the move.
TURN 9
Nadia: “They haven't seen us..”
Nadia looked at the battlefield.
“There's too many of them and too few of us. It's over.”
“We can't risk the artifact.”
The artifact has been recovered. Mission objective completed.
-End of entry-
Conclusion
Major Natalya: “So you just left them there.”
Nadia: “An aerial intervention was out of the question because of the obelisks and-.”
Natalya interrupts her.
“Yes, of course.. And the Black Bird. What is it?”
Nadia: “The Black Bird was supposed to be the symbol of Noxar power but the project was way too ambitious. It required everything to be redesigned: Engines, landing gears, weaponry,... It was a fantasy from the start. Titan Starship ended up losing a ton of money and the Ship was never build.
Natalya: “One last thing. What was Niav promoted to?”
Nadia looked at the window briefly before answering.
“Captain of the Galaxy..”
Major Natalya: “Well played.”
Natalya:“We're done here. Get back to the Ship.”
The Assyrians left the Galaxy.
Nadia: “ I don't trust her. Get ready to move!”
First Officer: “Captain. We have received a communication from the supervisor. You are to report immediately to Deep Space Management headquarter.”
Nadia: “You look formal..”
Natalya: “Report.”
Officer: “We gained access to their main computer but we will need some time to hack all the data.”
Natalya: “Excellent.”
The end!
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That was awesome. Well done.
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I'm not 100% sure what's going on, but it's awesome all the same.
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That's all there really is to say on that matter, this is really well made, has a high production value, and looks amazing. Great work!
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Incredible. The set design and the effects were particularly attractive.
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Everything here is just fantastic.
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I'm a little sad that Flyer-1 didn't get to do more. It just looked so sweet. Alas, poor Flyer-1, we hardly knew thee. You are with the rocket-powered laser-armed death angels now. Farewell...
But in all seriousness, everything was magnificent. I just have a soft spot in my heart for cool spaceships.
But in all seriousness, everything was magnificent. I just have a soft spot in my heart for cool spaceships.
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I love these stories Bricksyd. Keep 'em coming!
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Yeah, I don't want to gush or anything but I'm going to go ahead and gush. You had me with An Old Friend. You are masterfully creative with Battle Reports as a whole. Your set design is gorgeous and your attention to detail nothing short of legendary. And your photos are clean and clear. The more I reread, the more I like. I've referenced the other one a few times already when talking about good BRs with people. Just really good stuff, mate. Your efforts are very much appreciated.
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I love the detail in the ships, but the background scenery is also nice. You seem to have a special talent for making BURPs and LURPs look like they just blend right in.Quantumsurfer wrote:Yeah, I don't want to gush or anything but I'm going to go ahead and gush. You had me with An Old Friend. You are masterfully creative with Battle Reports as a whole. Your set design is gorgeous and your attention to detail nothing short of legendary. And your photos are clean and clear. The more I reread, the more I like. I've referenced the other one a few times already when talking about good BRs with people. Just really good stuff, mate. Your efforts are very much appreciated.