Assualt in the Bushes
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Assualt in the Bushes
Sooo... this is my first battle report. The story is that th epolice got a tip off about some rebel scum hiding somewhere, and wet to hunt them out. Do I really need a massive storyline. So anyway, here was the setup(sorry for the terribel image quality, my phone is not a dedicated camera):
The police decided they should storm the area, but, found out heavy armour is not for running fast. Who knew? The minigunner decided to blow up a bike and kill a rebel.
KA-BEWM!
That red blob was a minifig head.
This is the reason for the past tense:
The police shot thier shotguns with pikaxe bayonets into the rebels.
More trees were killed than rebels.
And the riot policeman engages in MORTAL COMBAT with a ninja.
The rebels shot a rocket at the polices feet.
Turns out it was a dud, simply spilling gunpowder everywhere. Seriously guys, be more careful, some people have asthma you know!
The rebels then attacked the police, which largly failed, Except for the mobbing of the roit policman.
Turns out the sniper and the riot policeman were drinking buddies, so the sniper took revenge.
A heavy with a flamethrower takes an energy pulse to the chest
And the minigunner causes more chaos.
4 kills, I think it was.
The survivor doesent take it well.(What was going through his mind: )
HAAAAAA.....
DOUKEN!
Thats one (1) Hadouken related death.
Woman trips, guy robs her of a whacking pole.
An especially lucky round for the police. One less mercenary to pay, and these rebels are really bad at aiming for the head!
But a guy falls from about 5 rounds. Ouch.
Not to worry, his teammate fashions a double pikaxe-bayonet out of the corpses one.
That ninja goes for the sniper,
Not that it works.
Double pikaxes are put to good use.
And the fact the shotgun can stillbe fired after a melle atack is handy in killing supernatureal martial artists!
Energy pulses for good pirates!
And katanas for naughty pistol-toting armoured twins!
the thief who would rob a girl rushes at the sniper.
But isn't quick enough.
Another brutal pikaxe-related death
the captian finshes the last rebel off.
End of the battle.
So, Critiques? praise?(doubt im gonna get any)
The police decided they should storm the area, but, found out heavy armour is not for running fast. Who knew? The minigunner decided to blow up a bike and kill a rebel.
KA-BEWM!
That red blob was a minifig head.
This is the reason for the past tense:
The police shot thier shotguns with pikaxe bayonets into the rebels.
More trees were killed than rebels.
And the riot policeman engages in MORTAL COMBAT with a ninja.
The rebels shot a rocket at the polices feet.
Turns out it was a dud, simply spilling gunpowder everywhere. Seriously guys, be more careful, some people have asthma you know!
The rebels then attacked the police, which largly failed, Except for the mobbing of the roit policman.
Turns out the sniper and the riot policeman were drinking buddies, so the sniper took revenge.
A heavy with a flamethrower takes an energy pulse to the chest
And the minigunner causes more chaos.
4 kills, I think it was.
The survivor doesent take it well.(What was going through his mind: )
HAAAAAA.....
DOUKEN!
Thats one (1) Hadouken related death.
Woman trips, guy robs her of a whacking pole.
An especially lucky round for the police. One less mercenary to pay, and these rebels are really bad at aiming for the head!
But a guy falls from about 5 rounds. Ouch.
Not to worry, his teammate fashions a double pikaxe-bayonet out of the corpses one.
That ninja goes for the sniper,
Not that it works.
Double pikaxes are put to good use.
And the fact the shotgun can stillbe fired after a melle atack is handy in killing supernatureal martial artists!
Energy pulses for good pirates!
And katanas for naughty pistol-toting armoured twins!
the thief who would rob a girl rushes at the sniper.
But isn't quick enough.
Another brutal pikaxe-related death
the captian finshes the last rebel off.
End of the battle.
So, Critiques? praise?(doubt im gonna get any)
Last edited by Nimja on Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Assualt in the Bushes
Nice and Violent! I'd reccomend some more natural light and less flash, but other than that it's pretty good.
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Thank you! A agree, I think my flash was a bit too strong.
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Re: Assualt in the Bushes
Not a bad first attempt; you know about the flash and image quality issues, so I won't hound them. Here are some other suggestions for additional go-arounds.
6). Take some initial battlefield shots of the layout and the opposing forces. This allows the viewer to know who is fighting whom and where they are relative to each other; in this battle, I had no clue who was a rebel and who was a police person. This will help following the battle.
7). Interspersing battlefield overviews with close-ups draws attention to specific details and gives a sense of how individual fights relate to the whole battle. You did this relatively decently.
. More terrain (especially lego) is good terrain. If you are limited on what is available, I know that can be tough.
9). Keep em coming.
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6). Take some initial battlefield shots of the layout and the opposing forces. This allows the viewer to know who is fighting whom and where they are relative to each other; in this battle, I had no clue who was a rebel and who was a police person. This will help following the battle.
7). Interspersing battlefield overviews with close-ups draws attention to specific details and gives a sense of how individual fights relate to the whole battle. You did this relatively decently.
. More terrain (especially lego) is good terrain. If you are limited on what is available, I know that can be tough.
9). Keep em coming.
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Re: Assualt in the Bushes
that was a great battle! i'm gonna do one tomorrow hopefully
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Re: Assualt in the Bushes
man those rebels got annialatedthat was a great battle! i'm gonna do one tomorrow hopefully
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Re: Assualt in the Bushes
yeah. might be to do with the fact I couldnt be arsed checking CP.
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The chaos! I luv it!!1!11!!1one!
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whats with your sudden obsession with <word>!!!!11!11!one!?
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It's a joke!!1!1!!eleven!Nimja wrote:whats with your sudden obsession with <word>!!!!11!11!one!?
Re: Assualt in the Bushes
about what?
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About when you make !s you sometimes fail and make 1s. So i say !!1!!11!1!!111!1one! as a joke.Nimja wrote:about what?
Re: Assualt in the Bushes
PS, the soldier guys are also going to be part of an upcoming faction.
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What will it be? A soldier faction? Amaaaaazinggggg. I might be drunk.Nimja wrote:PS, the soldier guys are also going to be part of an upcoming faction.
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No, a fledgling space "empire"
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