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Postby OneEye589 » Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:13 pm

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Postby Nitewatchman » Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:19 pm

Warhead wrote:How about this.

Ho! Arse,
Stop waxing romantic and get off yar lazy teenage butt and contribute.
Start with helping your worked to death mother with the fuckin' shopping.
Damn it!

*roll tear down cheek*

*insert standing ovation here*

james+burgundy wrote:I put this up here to see how you guys would rip it apart and its kind of disappointing so far I mean even warheads insult was lacking imagination   :(  I expected better form the likes of him

Write one of those for a female, buy a ukulele, and put it to music.
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Postby Olothontor » Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:25 pm

stubby wrote:It uses words and phrases that sound deep.  But he's not actually saying anything.  There's nothing there to comment on.

It's like grabbing a bunch of long words out of the dictionary and plunking them down at random on a page.
I think agathokakological batrachomyomachia is deanthropomorphisation, except for honorificabilitudinitatibus in the quadradimensionality.

There, did I sound smart?

Yes and no. He is actually SAYING something here, and if need be it could be analyzed, rather decently at that. Admittedly, one or two of his words are misused (vanguard), but overall it makes SENSE. I get what he's saying, and I'd consider the prose to be above average.

It's a sad excuse, but it's true.
It's just not WORTH commenting on, because it's J+B.
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