Ken's Artsy Endeavors

[BFenix]

[Captain-Camper]

Ho shit Ken is making art again!

[Kommander Ken]

I know I haven't posted anything in a good while, so I wanted to kind of give a little sneaky peaky at what I've been doing in place of actual plastic building block warfare.


As an example, this is literally just me messing about and not taking quality artwork into consideration. Practicing page/panel layout as well as other shit. These were just supposed to be thumbnail pages that I ended up posting on Reddit for critique. Behold and beware!

[Tzan]

Kriteek

The missing sword section

The dashed outline is obscured by too much stuff.
You can make the "Now" panel go down to the bottom of the page and have the dashed lines
The "Wait" panel could have any image or just text: "Where the hell is my sword"
Lower right stays the same.
The words "Wait" and "My sword" are deleted.

Alternate:
Its just a text panel using all the words:
"Wait... My sword. Where the hell is my sword?!"

I think the dashed outline was something important to show.

[Kommander Ken]

Thanks for the kriteek, Tzan. Sorry for taking another 3 months to get back to you, but  

Looking more into it, these are all solid suggestions that will be added into the real thing. That is, if that scene is actually canon or not.

[Tzan]

Kool

[Kommander Ken]

I did this for class.

[Tzan]

That was pretty good, nice job