Quallon's Lead [JJJ18]

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Quallon's Lead [JJJ18]

Postby RedRover » Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:40 am

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Quallon pauses, taking in the wild flowers that the sprout along the mossy banks of the brook. The soft pink of the petals taunt him, acting as a painful reminder of that day, the day he was torn from his mentor. It’s been months since that incident and not a day has passed where Quallon has retired from his efforts. Though the trail has been cold for awhile, a new lead has led him to this planet and reinstalled hope in Quallon. He wonders to himself, “How could such a tranquil place potentially be home to such a sinister force?” The irony was not lost on Quallon.

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Re: Quallon's Lead [JJJ18]

Postby Kommander Ken » Wed Jul 11, 2018 1:14 pm

Oh man I'm in love with those elite troopers' design.
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Re: Quallon's Lead [JJJ18]

Postby Falk » Wed Jul 11, 2018 3:52 pm

Looking good as always.
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Re: Quallon's Lead [JJJ18]

Postby Kommander Ken » Sun Aug 05, 2018 3:53 pm

Style – 8/10
I like the stark contrast between the minifigs and the bright peaceful background.

Substance – 9/10
The level of detail in such a small build is pretty neat overall.

Photography – 10/10
Pretty much everything here is on point.  

Theme – 1/10
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Re: Quallon's Lead [JJJ18]

Postby Dienekes22 » Wed Aug 08, 2018 11:16 pm

Style: 8/10

Substance: 8/10

Photography: 10/10
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Re: Quallon's Lead [JJJ18]

Postby aoffan23 » Sat Aug 11, 2018 8:50 pm

Style: 8/10
The minifigs are awesome, and I agree with Ken on the colour choices. The score would be higher but the terrain is a little weird. It looks kind of like the minifigs are walking on diorama that's smaller scale than they are, because the rocks look more like mountains than anything.

Substance: 7/10
While there aren't any extremely interesting techniques going on, the builds of both the base and mnifigs are good. I do think some more detailed parts for the plants would have done some good in terms of making the terrain look like it's at the right scale.

Photography: 10/10
Not really much to say here, your setup is perfect.

Theme: 1/10

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