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by FEEB
Tue Jan 21, 2025 2:33 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] The Doctor Will Remember You Now
Replies: 5
Views: 6914

Re: [BF24] The Doctor Will Remember You Now

FEEB wrote:
Tue Jan 21, 2025 2:28 am
Title (as I'm sure is intentional) is very old-timey Dick (lol) or Ellison sci-fi.
We'll Remember It For You Wholesale! That's what I was thinking of.
by FEEB
Tue Jan 21, 2025 2:28 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] The Doctor Will Remember You Now
Replies: 5
Views: 6914

Re: [BF24] The Doctor Will Remember You Now

Concept 9. Love the character it chooses to focus on and the simple wrinkle introduced into this stock character's life that makes up the story. Title (as I'm sure is intentional) is very old-timey Dick (lol) or Ellison sci-fi. Form 8. Enjoyed the read once I got into it. Voice 9. Dripping with the ...
by FEEB
Tue Jan 21, 2025 1:57 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] Midnights
Replies: 3
Views: 5966

Re: [BF24] Midnights

Concept 7. Comfy fantasy fun Form 7. Simple, serviceable Voice 9. Likewise. Pleasant and straightforward. Probably my favorite writing style out of all the entries. Style 15. I like that it's a slice of life without concerning itself with lore or plot, but also making sure characters have something ...
by FEEB
Tue Jan 21, 2025 1:42 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] The Ascension of Ya-Ooma
Replies: 3
Views: 6258

Re: [BF24] The Ascension of Ya-Ooma

Concept 4. Dumb fun Form 4. What the fuck? :wtc: Voice 5. What the fuck :wtc: Style 19. I can't give this a perfect score in fairness but I loved this too much and laughed too many times to give it anything less than this since the other scores are so low. I wish the rest of these were more like thi...
by FEEB
Tue Jan 21, 2025 1:36 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] One Night in the Garden
Replies: 3
Views: 6352

Re: [BF24] One Night in the Garden

Concept 8. Effective premise if a little predictable. The irony isn't lost on me that this is the same opinion you've already received. Form 7. I like the structure and it's all executed fine but I do think it could be a little shorter for what it is. Voice 5. I'm split right down the middle because...
by FEEB
Tue Jan 21, 2025 1:13 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] My Little WORLD ORDER Bot Can't Be This Cute!
Replies: 4
Views: 6346

Re: [BF24] My Little WORLD ORDER Bot Can't Be This Cute!

Concept 7 I like the premise. Generic but tried and true. Form 4 I like a lot of the imagery (description of the WOB, etc.) but it feels really basic and there's a weird amount of pop culture references (Death Star, Doctor Strange etc)? Based on our interactions before I believe English is your seco...
by FEEB
Tue Mar 12, 2024 2:57 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: Heretic of Dew
Replies: 1
Views: 5614

Heretic of Dew

Excerpt from the recitations of the sacred Fifth Translation of commentaries by most reverent Chughog Thirst Kwencher, as known to the Baja Gesserit. Second Edition, et. al, Esq. In all life pangs thirst. For this dry thirst, bring forth a six pack. For the greed this brings, construct a fountain. ...
by FEEB
Sun Dec 10, 2023 7:09 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF23] Charger's Clone Dome
Replies: 3
Views: 6030

[BF23] Charger's Clone Dome

https://brikwars.com/wiki/images/c/c2/2023_LoreMaster_Badge.png (For imagery and context: https://brikwars.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=17&t=19092&p=369063#p369063) Thunk! Thunk! Ftttcch. Junior Soaprano chucked away the assorted pieces of his grandnephew. Christuffuh Soaprano settled like fill dirt ...
by FEEB
Mon Oct 09, 2023 3:10 am
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: Sector Protectorate (Updated)
Replies: 0
Views: 1852

Sector Protectorate (Updated)

Remake of previous thread for BM23 stripped of battle-pack contest elements, and to be kept up to date with ongoing lore. The Sector Protectorate - alias, Space Feds. https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/53231152990_a73f287170_o.png The Sector Protectorate gather for an overpriced group photo at Cos...
by FEEB
Sun Sep 17, 2023 4:48 am
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: The Charger Cartel (and, The Soapranos)
Replies: 0
Views: 1936

The Charger Cartel (and, The Soapranos)

Charger was an asshole careening down an Alabama freeway. Drunk, high, who knows? Wobbling around like one of those big Russian spinning tops. He was in an 18-wheeler, he thinks. He can't remember exactly how it went down. Then, he was there to see the blue and grey starships streak across the Secto...
by FEEB
Sun Jul 02, 2023 4:44 am
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: The Soapranos - Episode 1
Replies: 1
Views: 6194

The Soapranos - Episode 1

A very casual battle; me and the girlfriend were tired and maybe a little tipsy. Cellphone photography is obvious, and I didn't bother with any cool bloodsplosions. Still, I've been meaning to start regular battle reports; something low-stakes should make a fun dry run! The setting (The Sectors) wil...
by FEEB
Wed May 24, 2023 6:40 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: [BM23] Children of Dew Battlepack
Replies: 5
Views: 1535

Re: [BM23] Children of Dew Battlepack

These guys could move a Mountain
by FEEB
Wed May 24, 2023 3:53 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: [BM23] Sector Protectorate
Replies: 3
Views: 1432

[BM23] Sector Protectorate

New Faction: The Sector Protectorate The Sector Protectorate - alias, Space Feds! Charting and defending the starfields with pomp and circumstance, this military-industrial complex declared itself the federal government of the Sectors several years ago. Admiral Edward James Almost's stern speeches ...
by FEEB
Mon Mar 13, 2023 6:08 pm
Forum: New People Start Here
Topic: Introduce yourself!
Replies: 3570
Views: 1662854

Re: Introduce yourself!

Who are you? :mystery: I'm a hobbyist LEGO guy; had a dark age until a few years back, got back into the video games first, and am now enjoying MOCs for my first go as an adult. Girlfriend loves tabletop games, introduced Brikwars on a whim, now it's a go-to for my friendgroup; they probably don't ...