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<Cerrel>
"Well fought! We should probably get some rest now, but sleep lightly. We don't want another incident like we had just now."

I return to my tent, and tinker on my projectile weapon, making it more efficient.

....lotsa progress while I was away. I like the way that the story is coming along so far. I'm wondering how we're going to manage the space battles...... But oh well, we'll cross that bridge when we get to it. Okay, now that we have our character archetypes, we need to decide: A) how big is Ship A?...

Finally! Another Synthetic army! Welcome to the forum!

I fire my shotgun at the guy on the left. I then reload (pump shotgun) and fire again.

Ross_Varn wrote:So I'm getting vibes that this is going to be a "kill " series.

We are not going to be popular.

Fix'd.

We are bad robots!
No one can stop robot!
ha ha ha!
Roger, Roger!

Meh, those are tablescraps using half-bit HF parts. You should see some of the stuff on mocpages. freakn'. Metal.

A bit of advice: try to reserve present tense for a few specific kinds of writing. The bulk of any storytelling ought to be past tense. For instance, if you are introducing a location for a story, you might describe it in present tense, but then once the action commences you'd need to transition to...

Agreed. definitely. Perhaps the ship's secret purpose is an override of the AI (the insane one, perhaps?) or navigational system, heading towards the crew's home planet with some sort of superweapon? That sounds like something the Immortals would do. Make you think something is important, you take ...

Beat that! Asus I7 processot with really good graphics and decent memory for ALMOST HALF PRICE. $699 instead of $1,199.

At least one mech pilot. with a totally badass mech.

<Cerrel>
I reload and fire again at the shades.

<Ryan>

Although I was slightly miffed, the brute had the right idea. "we could try to ambush the marauders, and loot whatever they have left. Besides, we'd also get a set of wheels."

<Ryan>
I nod, handing over the scrap metal and putting the rest in my pack. I load my shotgun with a slug round. "Let's see what these guys got, eh?

(Do I need to say what I find when looking for useful stuff myself? 'Cause if so, things would get a little unbalanced.)