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by TheCraigfulOne
Wed Jan 22, 2020 4:33 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2019
Replies: 21
Views: 1999

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2019

Congrats!
by TheCraigfulOne
Tue Jan 14, 2020 4:10 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2019
Replies: 21
Views: 1999

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2019

ninja_bait wrote:
Tue Jan 14, 2020 2:32 pm
Hey Quantum, I missed that style is rated out of 20. Can you just double my scores in that category so I don't have to edit all those posts :rtfm:
I was wondering if you had forgotten or if you just thought all the entries were really crappy.
by TheCraigfulOne
Tue Jan 14, 2020 1:17 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2019
Replies: 21
Views: 1999

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2019

My judging is complete. If someone (Quantum?) can serve as a secondary judge for my entry, I think we can wrap this up.
by TheCraigfulOne
Tue Jan 14, 2020 1:15 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF19] 24 hours before Exterminatus...
Replies: 3
Views: 583

Re: [BF19] 24 hours before Exterminatus...

Concept and Theme: 7 - A good expansion to your canon. Form: 8 - Like ninja_bait said, the one scene works well on its own. Voice: 7 - Pretty good. Style: 16 - Not bad, but could use a little more fleshing out. Presentation: 6 - A little blocky, and while I don't mind the bold text, the asterisks in...
by TheCraigfulOne
Tue Jan 14, 2020 1:01 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF19] Hellhunt
Replies: 3
Views: 317

Re: [BF19] Hellhunt

Concept and Theme: 10 - I love it. I'm not usually one for the more meta-styled BrikWars stuff, but this is great. Form: 9 - Could've been a tiny bit longer, but part of what makes it work is how direct and to-the-point it is. Voice: 8 - Short but sweet. Style: 19 - Almost perfect. Presentation: 9 -...
by TheCraigfulOne
Tue Jan 14, 2020 12:54 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: (BF19) Ragnablok Epilogue: The End is the Beginning
Replies: 4
Views: 465

Re: (BF19) Ragnablok Epilogue: The End is the Beginning

Concept and Theme: 9 - A great expansion of BrikVerse lore and a nice addition to the Bookwyrm Saga. Form: 7 - A little disjointed, I imagine the full version does much better with this. Voice: 7 - It's part of a much larger saga, so there's not much in the way of backstory for the characters. Not r...
by TheCraigfulOne
Tue Jan 14, 2020 12:44 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF19] The First Battle
Replies: 3
Views: 489

Re: [BF19] The First Battle

Concept and Theme: 10 - Is it similar to your entry from last year? Yes. Is it an interesting expansion of the lore and does it provide an interesting contrast with the ending? Also yes. Form: 9 - I really don't have any major complaints. Voice: 10 - Compelling characters, gripping tension. Style: 1...
by TheCraigfulOne
Tue Jan 14, 2020 12:35 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF19] The Raid (Part one)
Replies: 4
Views: 410

Re: [BF19] The Raid (Part one)

Concept and Theme: 8 - Interesting concepts aplenty. Form: 6 - A good outline, but a little short for my taste, I think the paragraphs could use moar fleshing out. Voice: 7 - Moar character development plz. Style: 15 - No shortage of cool ides, but the execution could be longer and more developed. P...
by TheCraigfulOne
Sat Jan 11, 2020 11:01 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: MadMario`s Faction Index
Replies: 14
Views: 1408

Re: MadMario`s Faction Index

That truck is amazing.
by TheCraigfulOne
Sat Jan 11, 2020 10:50 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: The Acquiriens
Replies: 4
Views: 494

Re: The Acquiriens

:<3:
by TheCraigfulOne
Sun Jan 05, 2020 9:54 pm
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: Giant Dice
Replies: 1
Views: 270

Giant Dice

I saw this today and I thought you guys might appreciate it:
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by TheCraigfulOne
Sat Dec 28, 2019 12:54 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2019
Replies: 21
Views: 1999

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2019

Shit, we still don't have a secondary judge.
by TheCraigfulOne
Sat Dec 28, 2019 12:52 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF19] The Sound and The Fury
Replies: 3
Views: 441

[BF19] The Sound and The Fury

The gunships roared overhead, the thunder of their engines pounding in the Warking's eardrums despite his heavy helmet. The sound of their bombing was like a thousand hurricanes roaring bloody murder, and the flashes of light that exploded into the night sky lit up the world as bright as high noon. ...
by TheCraigfulOne
Fri Dec 27, 2019 6:19 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: MadMario`s Faction Index
Replies: 14
Views: 1408

Re: MadMario`s Faction Index

:<3: As Brag said, the dark blue and red make for a very striking color scheme.