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ninja_bait wrote: ↑

Mon Aug 10, 2020 5:15 pm

I might be unfairly punishing this entry...

I´m not taking this as unfair, because you´re right. Maybe with more time I could´ve made a static vignette with the same effectiveness.

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Nice build and story. The details of the factory make it believable and convincing. Also the setting arouses curiosity on the storyline and factions. Hope to see more of the Brikwave collective in the future!

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Besides the relatively "flat" build (could´ve been a little more detailed overall), the setting and characters are recognizable and well set in scene, along with smooth lighted pics with good background. Nice work!

Style: 9 Substance: 8 Photography: 8 Theme: 9 A great and well-thought sculpture, I especially like the contrasting colours, which also show in the backdrop. Furthermore, Tensegrity on this scale is not to be scoffed at. Also, believable and recognizable characters. Warlok Truk is going places for ...

Style: 9 Substance: 8 Photography: 8 Theme: 7 Despite the humble size of this build there´s one important thing: Atmosphere. The lighting and the details capture this very effectively, and though there´s some shadowy sections in the build, the pictures are never too dark. Good work!

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A really amazingly detailed battlefield. There´s so much going on and yet everything´s recognizable. Perfect from colour scheme to amount of details on terrain. And the most brikwarsy battle going on.

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What can I say, an enormous MOC with still so many details in it, well set in scene with the pictures and extensive explanations. Every detail has its story. Well done!

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Photography: 8
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A nice detailed build that makes you long for more, nice implemention of N_B`s Space Repair Garage, and convincing characters.

Thanks for the feedback! That was a rollercoaster of emotions, and the most challenging storyline by now. Let´s see how it all develops, for it laid the foundation for many future ideas and settings.

(And if you want your storyline invaded, too, drop me a line )

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Food_Truk wrote: ↑

Mon Jul 27, 2020 11:55 pm

Jeez, what a behemoth. Just shows there's no concept of 'overkill' in BW.

Over... what´s this word? Over-kill? Never heard. I don´t understand this.