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Made a first entry for the Showcase as an Armoury post

Da Brootalz Kustom Kroozer... https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/49446182642_44831d5599_b.jpg ...is a vehicle built from mostly junk found in the remains of recent battlefields. https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/49445483563_d73052c0f9_b.jpg Parts of other destroyed vehicles, road signs, scrap me...

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Concept and Theme - 8 - good as a standalone story, makes you curious to learn more. Form - 8 - solid structure, easy to follow. Voice - 7 - good carved dialogue, like a good stage performance. Style - 14 - overall fine piece of writing. Presentation - 7 - a little blocky without any paragraphs

Concept and Theme - 9 - a very brikwarsy tone
Form - 8 - good structure, could´ve been a little longer
Voice - 9 - mystic meta-level
Style - 16 - nice idea of storytelling
Presentation - 8 - good

Concept and Theme - 10 - good link to past and future storylines Form - 7 - It reads like several post credit scenes that make you long for the upcoming movies Voice - 9 - good character interaction, clear structure Style - 18 - very original and compelling Presentation - 8 - good and solid

Concept and Theme - 8 - very brikwarsy tone, like it. Form - 9 - a little jolty in the measure, but cohesive and straightforward Voice - 9 - I imagine James Earl Jones reading it Style - 14 - The paragraphs were a little repetitive. And it was glorious. Presentation - 7 - solid piece of brikwars po...

Concept and Theme - 9 - a very dark and brikwarsy tone Form - 8 - good structure, not too fast-paced, not too slow Voice - 10 - detailed description, compelling from the very beginning Style - 16 - though not the most original of storylines, a fine piece of writing. Presentation - 8 - you´re really...

Concept and Theme - 7 - Interesting concepts, a little hard to find in Form - 7 - framework is okay, a little too many paragraphs i think Voice - 8 - like the style, yet the many introduced characters are only treated superficially Style - 14 - It´s original, and makes you want to know more about i...

Interstellar Mercenary Association (state of B.R.2020) http://brikwars.com/wiki/images/4/4e/IMA_Flag00.jpg The Interstellar Mercenary Association (IMA) is an independent organisation that works as a roofing bond to bring together freelance mercs and adventurers. The purpose is to bundle manpower an...

recommended listening https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/49310501048_f1c46826c8_b.jpg "HEY YOU!" https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/49311201152_d6f29db701_b.jpg "I´m sure you know one or more of the following problems! :" https://live.staticflickr.com/65535/49310999271_4a3d66682f_b.jpg "So maybe ...

StarCorps (state of B.R.2.019) http://brikwars.com/wiki/images/thumb/7/78/StarCorpsFlag1a.png/800px-StarCorpsFlag1a.png "StarCorps" is the generic term for all of the military branches of STAR Corp. LLC. This incorporates all miltary units from normal soldiers to large interstellar dreadnaughts. St...

This Index shall be the List of Armies, Factions, Groups, Cameos and Ideas that I created. I will try to put all the stuff in here in a reasonable and well-aranged order, starting of course with my biggest and best known faction - the StarCorps. As the list grows, here shall appear quicklinks to the...

Thanks, I`m really feeling honoured. And I also plan to extend the Cameo Troops a little in the near future.

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Thu Dec 12, 2019 3:23 am

It looks like the numbers of Starcorps rise quite fast