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by Scribonius
Sun Feb 09, 2025 3:39 pm
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: [RK25] Arrrrr you ready?
Replies: 14
Views: 587

Re: [RK25] Arrrrr you ready?

Arrrrrr... I like pirates, this was interesting. Fun: 15 Lots of action, lots of swashbuckling finesse and critfails, plus one critsuccess that made even a minifigure get introspective... Violence: 7 Lots of violence, but not as much as the other entries. Photos: 7 Would have been higher with more i...
by Scribonius
Sun Feb 09, 2025 3:31 pm
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: [RK25] Staff(cannon) measuring Contest
Replies: 8
Views: 303

Re: [RK25] Staff(cannon) measuring Contest - Turn 3

Hmm... Fun: 10 Didn't really get the feel for this one? Might just be me? Violence: 8 That was a lot of destruction... Photo: 8 Decent photos, immersion was pretty good, but kind of... confusing? Writing: 4 I didn't really understand much of what was happening here? Some more context would have been...
by Scribonius
Sun Feb 09, 2025 3:19 pm
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: [RK25] Report: Nobody likes trolls
Replies: 7
Views: 300

Re: [RK25] Report: Nobody likes trolls

What... THE... F&*#?!? Fun: 18 I didn't really understand a lot of what was happening, but I was laughing a LOT when reading this, and that counts for a lot in my book. Violence: 9 My, there was a lot of carnage in this... Photography: 6 That was a LOT of photos. Almost too many, really, to the poin...
by Scribonius
Sun Feb 09, 2025 3:03 pm
Forum: Forum Battles
Topic: The Price of Thought [KK] [RK25] [COMPLETE]
Replies: 9
Views: 1088

Re: The Price of Thought [KK] [RK25] [Epilogue]

Wow. Just... Wow. Fun: 16 I didn't necessarily understand everything going on, but the whole thing felt like a cinematic experience, not a Brikwar. Violence: 10 You have to ask why??? Photography: 10 Even shots with non-Lego look awesome because of the lighting effects, which were STUPENDOUS. Seriou...
by Scribonius
Sun Jan 05, 2025 6:44 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] Midnights
Replies: 3
Views: 303

Re: [BF24] Midnights

Well that's different. Concept: 8 As story ideas go, this is different. Feels like the start to an Isekai Manga, where the background characters are waiting for the big bad to appear and the hero to get hit by truck-kun. Form: 5 Flow is okay, framework is there, but it really needs to be fleshed out...
by Scribonius
Sun Jan 05, 2025 6:37 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] The Ascension of Ya-Ooma
Replies: 3
Views: 323

Re: [BF24] The Ascension of Ya-Ooma

Uhhhhhh... This has all of the makings of a weird Anime with confusing action scenes and weird, overpowered fighting techniques. Concept: 5 I get the general idea behind this, but it feels really weird and I'm not sure there IS a meaning here? Form: 7 The framework is there, the form is there, the n...
by Scribonius
Sun Jan 05, 2025 6:28 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] One Night in the Garden
Replies: 3
Views: 578

Re: [BF24] One Night in the Garden

Well this is definitely different. Concept: 8 Lots of meaning here. I want to rate this higher, but the idea isn't a new one, I've seen it before in many manga caps and stories. Form: 8 I like the form, and the core framework is very good. Voice: 5 Narration and character in this are very good for t...
by Scribonius
Sun Jan 05, 2025 6:20 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] My Little WORLD ORDER Bot Can't Be This Cute!
Replies: 4
Views: 475

Re: [BF24] My Little WORLD ORDER Bot Can't Be This Cute!

Hmm... title feels a little off? Concept: 7 Pretty good idea for a story, though it does express a certain amount of futility. Form: 7 It flows well, has a solid framework, and is easy to follow. Voice: 5 Narration is okay, though I think it could stand to be fleshed out a little. Doesn't really say...
by Scribonius
Sun Jan 05, 2025 6:13 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF24] The Doctor Will Remember You Now
Replies: 5
Views: 634

Re: [BF24] The Doctor Will Remember You Now

Different idea? Concept: 7 Interesting idea, different. Form: 6 Story flows pretty well, though it feels a little disjointed at times, but that might be because of the theme. Voice: 7 Narration from the doctor's viewpoint is consistent, though the character feels a little thin? That said, I have bee...
by Scribonius
Wed Nov 06, 2024 10:27 pm
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: [HH24] MadMario's Last Minute HellHunt Experimental Experience!
Replies: 11
Views: 876

Re: [HH24] MadMario's Last Minute HellHunt Experimental Experience!

Hmmm... Gameplay: 4 (I mean, this is a pretty classic Brikwar concept - lots of chaos, lots of mess, lots of weirdness) Photography: 2 (Some of the photos did not load in the main list - yes, linking me to the source files for the photos helped; thing is, that doesn't help me follow the action and u...
by Scribonius
Wed Nov 06, 2024 10:20 pm
Forum: Forum Battle Top Threads
Topic: [HH24] To Hell with this Campaign (Top Thread)
Replies: 4
Views: 847

Re: [HH24] To Hell with this Campaign (Top Thread)

Guess I'll do my judging here for the Hellhunt. Gameplay: 4 (lots of interesting terrain interaction, explosions, use of odd feats, all sorts of cool gimicks) Photography: 3 (Photos aren't bad, terrain is a little, um... hellish, excuse the joke, but not as clear as I would like - hard to tell who w...
by Scribonius
Wed Nov 06, 2024 7:09 pm
Forum: Reports From the Field
Topic: Extra City Extravaganza [HH winner 2024]
Replies: 31
Views: 2768

Re: [HH24] Extra City Extravaganza

Well, this was interesting. Agreed, nice rebuild of a older battle. Quite the commitment to a bit there. Gameplay: 3 (lots of back and forth, but hard to track the action sometimes) Photography: 5 (Now this is what I like! Tons of pics from different angles, lots of action, good background for the p...
by Scribonius
Wed Oct 09, 2024 10:48 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: [HPH24] Pogosus Cavalry Unit
Replies: 4
Views: 611

Re: [HPH24] Pogosus Cavalry Unit

...I love every part of this. Style: 10 This is one of the more unique builds I have seen this year. Interesting use of the radar dishes as the big spring and the googly eyes on the front make it kind of adorable. Substance: 9 I feel like something more COULD be done here, but I have no idea what, l...
by Scribonius
Wed Oct 09, 2024 10:40 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: [HPH24] B-5 (Blixian Bulking Brawler Battle Bot)
Replies: 3
Views: 473

Re: [HPH24] B-5 (Blixian Bulking Brawler Battle Bot)

Another mecha. Okay.... Style: 7 Okay, another mecha, but this once feels more compact and versatile than some of the other ones I've seen. No really unique parts use (other than the vehicle roof used as a shield - that's kind of cool). Substance: 8 I mean, clearly thought went into this? Pretty pla...
by Scribonius
Wed Oct 09, 2024 10:34 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: [HPH24] Varangian "Striker" Mk.II Anti-Tank UGV
Replies: 3
Views: 528

Re: [HPH24] Varangian "Striker" Mk.II Anti-Tank UGV

Nice little tonk. Style: 8 Reasonably creative, like the use of the wagon-yoke piece in the build. Substance: 7 it is... a little, stripped-down, basic tonk, but it has a moving turret of sorts. Photography: 7 Good photos here. No parts break-down, though. Story: 8 This is a decent background for su...