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My judgment is complete and I have rendered my verdict.

Concepts and theme: 8 The old story stand by, kill’en Piltogg. Brings to mind Hellboy and Doom. Form: 9 Easy and straightforward to follow. Voice: 8 I like that you threw in a few BW vernaculars but would have liked to see more. Style: 16 Solid written felt a little long winded at the start, it was...

Concepts and theme: 8 Orks and a prolog for a bigger story makes a good start to a new chapter in the Brikwars! saga. Brings to mind Warcraft III. Form: 9 good flow from point to point, fairly easy read. Voice: 9 The story is clear to follow, information is given as needed and it is not bogged down...

Concepts and theme: 8 A true Brikwars! setting, reminds me of Rouge One. Form: 9 Layed out in an effective and easy to digest manner. Voice: 9 clear and concise. Style: 16 It is a very solid story, well written, includes lore from Brikwars! Total: 42 Presentation: 9 one minor wording kerfuffle. 51

Concepts and theme: 9 A nice classical theme bringing to mind the siege of Troy. Form: 7 The story flows nearly flawlessly from one point of view to another. Though I do have to admit I did not realize it was doing so at the start. Voice: 10 I could envision nearly every move in full Lego as I read...

Concepts and theme: 7 Is it a story about an assassination or a manual about a hit teams equipment? Form: 8 The stories flow is choppy. Voice: 4 I found the structure of the story hard to read. Style: 10 The story starts as an exposition dump about the technology of its world with a tactical team u...

I am glad you decided to write an entry though I wish it were longer. Concepts and theme: 9 it is a solid concept crime ridden noir city and the man who lives in it. Form: 8 At first the paragraph brakes were jarring but when I got to the third the noir styling with implied missing section clicked i...

Concepts and theme: 8 Now this is a theme I have not seen in a long time and I am glad to. I have to admit a younger me would have found this hilarious but now being a over a million it is more nostalgic. Form: 9 The flow is good, it moves well from the introduction of the lecture in to the core co...

Concepts and theme: 9 Fantasy setting that gets to the point. I can tell this is part of a larger story which I have not read and do not need to, to be able to follow along. Form: 9 Flows nicely from the introduction of the setting and protagonist into the heart of the story. The writer gives time ...

Now that is a nice little build.
Though who ever made it, it looks like it spent some time on a shelf before it was taken out for photos.

if you apply and come out here let me know and I can introduce you to the local Lego groups.

You missed out, UBC is a great university. Though expensive, I may go there to finish my engineering degree.

This is England all they need is Boris to say everything is fine and Covid stays away. It "worked" for Manly Santa Day.

Nothing like that pacific ocean air to maintain a temperate lightly humid climate through out the year.
Also we got some very good Lego convention out here.

Concept and Theme: 8 Space horror is fun and this story captures it motifs quite nicely. Images of Event Horizon came to mind as I read this story though some parts a little to close which is why I had to deduct 2 point. Form: 10 I have to be honest this story excels at form. It neatly flows from t...