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by Nemoto-Sensei
Sat Jan 12, 2019 2:05 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] Apocalypse Inside
Replies: 5
Views: 1685

Re: [BF18] Apocalypse Inside

I love how you used the recommended listening and pics to enhance the reading experience, this was really a treat. However, I'm really hoping to see a future soap that expands on what happened in this brikfic. Concept & Theme - 8 Form - 9 Voice - 10 Style - 17 :troll: When the Brootalz gonna invade ...
by Nemoto-Sensei
Sat Jan 12, 2019 1:55 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] Interlude: Rising Tide of the Endless Void
Replies: 4
Views: 1056

Re: [BF18] Interlude: Rising Tide of the Endless Void

Now usually I'd include some extra notes, but its 10pm and today is deadline so I'll make it choppy. :warhead:
Concept and Theme - 8
Form - 8
Voice - 10
Style - 19

Looking forward to see more pictures and expansion on this story once the Brikfic Festival ends ;o
by Nemoto-Sensei
Fri Jan 11, 2019 2:28 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] So Long, and Thanks for All the Bricks
Replies: 12
Views: 2256

Re: [BF18] So Long, and Thanks for All the Bricks

Uhhhh since I'm a Brikfic judge I guess I gotta judge this. Wow. Just wow. I don't even know where to begin. The story is packed full of details and this is the first Brikfic I've read this season, including my own, which has actually moved me. The dialogue, the details, the sombre mood and flow. It...
by Nemoto-Sensei
Fri Jan 11, 2019 2:16 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] All I Want For Saturnalia Is Ragnablok
Replies: 4
Views: 1029

Re: [BF18] All I Want For Saturnalia Is Ragnablok

Concept and theme - 9 In all honesty, what you present here is hilarious. It's just so bizzare and I love it! Also awesome that you're getting in the mood of Ragnablok, always nice to see some foreshadowed brootalization. I love the idea of a bunch of kids doing a standoff against the Brootalz and I...
by Nemoto-Sensei
Sat Dec 15, 2018 5:16 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] RAGNABLOK RISING
Replies: 6
Views: 1294

Re: [BF18] RAGNABLOK RISING

Concept and theme - 8 With Ragnablok just around the corner, this makes for a very relevant story. There was also enough backstory included to help us understand what exactly is going on - a Brootal invasion. Form - 10 Nothing much to say here. A lot of well-written description for a relatively shor...
by Nemoto-Sensei
Fri Dec 14, 2018 5:32 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: BrikFiction Festival 2018
Replies: 23
Views: 3407

Re: BrikFiction Festival 2018

Man where the rest of the Brikfic gang at? The deadline is coming soon :shock:
by Nemoto-Sensei
Fri Dec 14, 2018 2:20 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: (BF18) Encounters in the Void
Replies: 5
Views: 1165

(BF18) Encounters in the Void

Tattered, white sails billowed in the cosmic gale, rippling violently like the waves of a raging ocean. The stillness was absolute, save for the rhythmic creaking of the metallic hull and the gentle whistle of the wind. 

 Raxus Nikolai, Captain of the Bijou, gazed out into the Nether-realm from his...
by Nemoto-Sensei
Thu Dec 06, 2018 12:33 am
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: DA BROOTALZ
Replies: 21
Views: 6382

Re: DA BROOTALZ

Overdue but still so lit nonetheless. Brootalz all da wae :troll:
by Nemoto-Sensei
Sat Nov 17, 2018 4:38 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: The heavy class SPINK
Replies: 5
Views: 1662

Re: The heavy class SPINK

very nice. Also, I am rather interested in that airship behind the spider tank. Will you be posting an image for that anytime soon? :warhead:
by Nemoto-Sensei
Wed Nov 14, 2018 1:12 pm
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] Night Defense
Replies: 8
Views: 1558

Re: [BF18] Night Defense

Yeah! Good on you on the writing. Very detailed stuff, just would've appreciated a lil' bit more background info.
by Nemoto-Sensei
Tue Nov 13, 2018 4:16 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] Night Defense
Replies: 8
Views: 1558

Re: [BF18] Night Defense

crap, ignore the random emote
by Nemoto-Sensei
Tue Nov 13, 2018 4:15 am
Forum: BrikFic
Topic: [BF18] Night Defense
Replies: 8
Views: 1558

Re: [BF18] Night Defense

Concept & Theme: 7 The story does not have an underlying or philosophical meaning behind it. It does show the character's fear of death, but apart from that Gwain remains very underdeveloped, which makes him unrelatable. Form: 9 The story flows very well. You had a series of small events in mind tha...
by Nemoto-Sensei
Fri Nov 09, 2018 7:12 pm
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: Muffin_Man's Factions and stuff
Replies: 18
Views: 3812

Re: Muffin_Man's Factions and stuff

That's odd, the images work for me :/
by Nemoto-Sensei
Tue Nov 06, 2018 11:20 am
Forum: The Armoury
Topic: Muffin_Man's Factions and stuff
Replies: 18
Views: 3812

Re: Muffin_Man's Factions and stuff

Wow. I love the whole steampunk vibe of your army. The builds are also really cool. Nice variety but I'd like to suggest getting some sort of helmet for the Legionnaires. Looking forward to more from you c;