[JJJ23] Wayshrine of John Barleycorn

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[JJJ23] Wayshrine of John Barleycorn

Post by Mr. President » Mon Jul 31, 2023 2:27 am

Aslan is the deity most invoked by knights, warriors, and royals of the Barley Kingdoms, especially during an ascendant Dark Lord; even lending his name to the region's mightiest kingdom. But the common folk generally have the most affection for John Barleycorn, the god of agriculture and the cycle of plant life, who it's said taught all the races to make liquor.

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You don't have to travel far down any particular road to find a wayshrine to the Lord of the Harvest, where the friendly druid-priests provide a safe place to rest, recuperate, and exchange news.

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In keeping with the god's teachings, they also provide food and drink to weary travelers. It's generally just simple beer and cider - but it's free, thanks to seasonal tithes. And this makes those for whom liquor is a business rather uneasy.

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The Azure League is making a big push to get its goods out there even further and wider, with some merchants even going to far as to set up shop right next to a wayshrine, hoping to entice peasants and travellers with their colorful carts - and sometimes even live entertainment.

Tensions have been running high. Let's hope nobody introduces any combustible elements into this situation . . .

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Re: [JJJ23] Wayshrine of John Barleycorn

Post by MadMario » Thu Aug 03, 2023 4:32 pm

Style: 7 - A nice little scene with some little details. Looks a little bit rushed.

Substance: 6 - Few parts were needed for a solid, recogizable scene. There could be a little more substance though, especially on the road.

Photography: 8 - Nice, smooth lighting, clear scenery.

Theme: 8 - Love the references and the story.
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Re: [JJJ23] Wayshrine of John Barleycorn

Post by Scribonius » Thu Aug 03, 2023 7:52 pm

...I was going to do something interesting with Statlor and Waldorf, but it is too freaking hot, and I still haven't done the Blarney Stone vingette for the loser of the Blarney Battle, so I'll keep it simple.

Interesting...

Style: 6. I like the concept, little wayside shrine catering to travelers with the big merchants trying to butt in on what they see as their turf. Nice aesthetics on the smaller builds here, and it kind of has a party feel in keeping with the Jamboree contest.

Substance: 6. Let's be honest, this is a simple build. I like it, don't get me wrong, but there's not a lot going on here, it is mostly minifigures. The design of the shrine roof, with the plants interlinked like that is pretty cool, and the color theming on the cart is nice, but the 'road' is really just some border rocks (which, ironically, is pretty in keeping with rural medieval roadways - Romans built roads, yes, but they didn't go everywhere, and most roads of the time were just well-marked, wheel-rutted dirt roads with the occasional bit of stone, gravel, or maybe brick. Or worse, courderoy roads, which were a bunch of logs laid in the dirt)

Photography: 7. They're a little blurry, but at least you have some kind of ground MADE OF BRICKS. Still no background, but nobody did one this contest, so meh. Pics do a pretty good job of conveying the theme and feel of the build.

Theme: 7 Okay, the dude in red is CLEARLY TGF, about to F some stuff up. Battle of the brews is an older theme that used to play out sometimes, and minifigures fighting over beer of any kind is pretty normal. You have a clear conflict in this piece, without openly displaying people fighting, with a properly Lego-esque happiness surrounding said conflict. Kudos. :D

All in all, I like this one a lot. Could have more details and some of the build could have been more complex, but it is nice.

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Re: [JJJ23] Wayshrine of John Barleycorn

Post by Quantumsurfer » Sat Aug 19, 2023 12:54 pm

Lunchboxninja wrote:Style: 6/10 I like the actual shrine, although I think the balance of the build might be a bit off
Substance: 6/10 I like the detailing you used to add the flowers, but I think the rest of the ground could use some love
Photography: 7/10
Theme: 8/10 lots of story and lore in this one!

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