https://starfelix.smugmug.com/My-First-Gallery heres my entry
Two turrets exchange fire
A warrior climbs to the deck
The battle on deck continues
the Ones from Beyond arrive
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[JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
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[JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
These images could use some captions to explain what's going on. I like the multicolor camouflage against the multicolor floor, smart.
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
That SHIP reminds me of mine, it’s really cool
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
thanks for the advice. I didnt do the camo on
Purpose but im glad you like it.
Purpose but im glad you like it.
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
There. added captions and accidentaly deleted a photo
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
Style - 3
Substance - 3
Photography 4
The actual scenes and subject matter are fun but it's not explained at all what's going on or who any of these minifigs are. the substance of the build and background is too chaotic, I feel the substance and dim and out of focus photography kind of hurt each other
Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
Style - 6 - good use of the parts you have, that`s the brikwars spirit
Substance - 5 - missing some details, and maybe a recognizable colour scheme would help to differ factions better
Photography - 4 - often too dark and a bit out of focus - it`s hard to follow whats going on here
Theme - 5 - maybe not referring actual events or characters(but that´s hard if you just started here, right?),
but very brikwarsy at all
Substance - 5 - missing some details, and maybe a recognizable colour scheme would help to differ factions better
Photography - 4 - often too dark and a bit out of focus - it`s hard to follow whats going on here
Theme - 5 - maybe not referring actual events or characters(but that´s hard if you just started here, right?),
but very brikwarsy at all
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Re: [JJJ19] The Ones from Beyond enter the war
Style: 6
While it may not be stylish in the traditional sense, it definitely feels like Brikwars. Also the Mindstorms monster is pretty frightening.
Substance: 4
It's hard to fault someone for not having the briks to make cohesive stuff, but it is very rainbow. I do like that tank with the airplane cockpit.
Photography: 3
The lighting is pretty wonky, which I can't tell if it's an issue of using flash or just the room this is taken in. It would also probably be worth working on the framing of your shots, so that you avoid having extra blank space (unless it's intentional).
Theme: 3
While it may not be stylish in the traditional sense, it definitely feels like Brikwars. Also the Mindstorms monster is pretty frightening.
Substance: 4
It's hard to fault someone for not having the briks to make cohesive stuff, but it is very rainbow. I do like that tank with the airplane cockpit.
Photography: 3
The lighting is pretty wonky, which I can't tell if it's an issue of using flash or just the room this is taken in. It would also probably be worth working on the framing of your shots, so that you avoid having extra blank space (unless it's intentional).
Theme: 3
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