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Note: Let me be the first candidate for the first competition. I hope it complies with the rules. Good luck to everyone so far.

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Terma United Nations
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MARCHING
An army rose from the blackened wasteland.

They greet the entire Brikverse.

They herald like poppies blooming in black lands.

March march. They walk tirelessly.

They come, carrying steel, fire, sweat and blood with them.

They are soldiers of Terma, avatars of death.








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seems just a little big for battle pack...

Space Bunny wrote: ↑

Thu May 25, 2023 11:35 am

seems just a little big for battle pack...

Ok.

My first competition novice. I misunderstood a little. I'm posting additional nominations.

Terma Rapid Response Unit.

(Legacy Factions)

Sometimes it is difficult to move an army from one place to another. These units go when it is necessary to quickly intervene in the conflict. Mobility is a priority for Terma.

This combat pack consists of a Terrain Crusher 4x4 vehicle, 2 troopers, 1 rocket trooper and 1 officer.

The story of this war pack may not satisfy you. But after all, these are just soldiers. It's satisfying enough for them to bury the enemy on the field.

Terma Support Unit

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Soldiers fight and die. But there are hidden heroes in the background who prepare and equip them for battle again. Without them there would be no army. They are a real battle pack. The harder they work, the better the road to victory is made.

They say
"Those who does not sweat in peace sheds blood in war"

Terma United Nations

• Theme: 5
• Story: 5
• Substance: 4
• Photography: 7

Terma Rapid Response Unit

• Theme: 7
• Story: 6
• Substance: 9
• Photography: 8

Terma Support Unit

• Theme: 7
• Story: 7
• Substance: 9
• Photography: 8

TERMA UNITED NATIONS
* Theme: 5 God these guys go together well. I want to see them in battle real bad. However, doesn't really fit the rules of the contest
* Story: 6
* Substance: 8 Gorgeous builds
* Photography: 9 I think these show off the builds very well

Terma Rapid Response Unit
* Theme: 9 Fits the contest exactly and it looks great! Extra points for keeping the parts count low and the build simple
* Story: 5
* Substance: 8
* Photography: 8

Terma Support Unit
* Theme: 8
* Story: 6
* Substance: 9 Best builds of the bunch imo
* Photography: 7

Terma UN
Theme - 9 - strong aesthetic for the faction
Substance - 6 - good builds, larger than the battlepack target
Story - 6 - I like the stinger, but it doesn't really give a story for the faction
Photography - 9

Terma RRU
Theme - 9 - unique, fits faction
Substance - 8 - build is good
Story - 9 - enough story for this pack
Photography - 9 - good use of sunlight

Terma support unit
Theme - 8 - much less edgy than the main faction
Substance - 9 - I like the idea of a pack of support equipment rather than one vehicle
Story - 9 - elaborated through photos well
Photography - 7 - a little confusing once the pack contents are distributed in the scenes