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The LEOS Stonebot performing its primary function while Prince Daggerdeen Irnhart performs his (chatting up uninterested princesses.)



In its quest for holy hegemony over the sundered chaos-planet formed when two worlds were smashed together, the Order of the Holy Nexus has become well acquainted with one fact of royal provenance: the headstrong prince will always set out for glory and adventure on his own, and he will always suck at it.

When it became clear that the Order was going through princes at an unsustainable rate, its greatest secret Sciontists applied principles of robotics and lithomancy to create the LEOS Stonebot, a retainer to protect the idiot son of the Irnhart royals. The Stonebot's immense weight and unnecessary grandeur make it unsuitable for mass production, but that suits the Order just fine - as long as it stays one-of-a-kind, Daggerdeen's ego will never let him give it up.

In its quest for holy hegemony over the sundered chaos-planet formed when two worlds were smashed together, the Order of the Holy Nexus has become well acquainted with one fact of royal provenance: the headstrong prince will always set out for glory and adventure on his own, and he will always suck at it.

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Style: 9 Pretty interesting parts use here, and an interesting design. I actually don't know where that head-canopy piece is from (or what it is). Love the lion-bas-relief use on the torso, and you clearly tried to give it sculpted shaping by using light grey ingots instead of just plain tiles.

Substance: 8 I mean, it is a stone golem. Inspired idea, but it has been done before? Though having it purposed as a protector for a prince who doesn't know what the heck he's doing is an inspired idea.

Photography: 7 Not a lot of photos. I'm ignoring the focus issues in the first one, because that was clearly a form of staging to make it look like the golem was lurking in the background to protect the prince, but a little more context visually would have been nice, or just more views - I'd like a side-view of it in action, for example.

Story: 10. First entry so far that made me laugh, and loud enough to wake up my wife, who fell asleep watching TV again!

style--7/10
substance--9/10
photography--8/10
story--9/10

Using the shoulderplate as a chest is genius! Love it! Hilarious duo too.

Style: 9
Substance: 8
Photography: 7
Story: 10