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Guess I'll do my judging here for the Hellhunt.

Gameplay: 4 (lots of interesting terrain interaction, explosions, use of odd feats, all sorts of cool gimicks)

Photography: 3 (Photos aren't bad, terrain is a little, um... hellish, excuse the joke, but not as clear as I would like - hard to tell who was alive and dead sometimes. I did like the joke about them accidentally shooting your lamp with the photo suddenly way darker than the others, which might have been the inspiration for the joke, yes)

Violence: 5 (yeah, lots of this)

Writing: 5 (You had an interesting storyline here. Demon-spiders fulfill the spider requirement, even though they didn't act very spider-like, but the cameos into other Hellhunt missives was a hoot, and other cameo appearances made this a fun read)

Overall Appeal: 4 (Was pretty good, though I had a few issues following the action at times. Really thought the Immortal Commander with the OTC should have leveled up for decapitating that daemoness)

Gameplay: 4 Incredible display of the sheer ossum that the brikwars ruleset combined with your favorite toys can generate. Only con is that the battlefield layout sometimes made it difficult to grasp the figs' relative positions and tactical options.

Photography: 4 Great work all around

Violence: 5 Plenty of booming, splatting and bzapping from start to finish

Writing: 5

Overall Appeal: 5 I admire your work and we absolutely need many more battles as cool as this, with great scenery, epic action and a thicc plot.

Yeah, the terrain made it a bit difficult to take pictures of the action. Having 3 different layers meant that a) i couldn't easily get to every part of the battlefield and b) there'd always be a few rocks in front of the action... bad call on my part. I can definitely see how that made it hard to see everything that was going on. Especially with the pile of debris and bodies in the center.

Gameplay - 5
Photography - 4
Violence - 4
Writing - 4
Overall Appeal - 5

Great submission! I had trouble understanding what was going on at times, and would have liked to have seen a final overview shot of the battlefield(s), but there was plenty of action and destruction going on. I also liked how you incorporated spiders into the battle. Good Work!