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Ok here is another battle from MNGG right now I am waiting for the pictures to load and I still have not named it. So here is the link to the report.

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What happened?

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I would rate this as good or as bad, but i can't because i don't know what just happened...

yah, I'll go edit in some more intresting adjectives about the battle later (jophy doesn't have a very good attention span) so probaly tomarow sumtime it will be better
also that megablox game we did is almost ready to get put up.

The battle looks interesting enough. The only problem is that, since you don't describe anything about it, we have no clue what's going on. That hailfire droid was pure ownage, though.

I lost one
He lost two
I lost one
I lost another three
He lost two
I lost my last one
He won.

piltogg wrote:yah, I'll go edit in some more intresting adjectives about the battle later (jophy doesn't have a very good attention span) so probaly tomarow sumtime it will be better
also that megablox game we did is almost ready to get put up.

You're going to write random words?

picklesniffer wrote:I lost one
He lost two
I lost one
I lost another three
He lost two
I lost my last one
He won.

That's nothing.

Blitzen wrote:

piltogg wrote:yah, I'll go edit in some more intresting adjectives about the battle later (jophy doesn't have a very good attention span) so probaly tomarow sumtime it will be better
also that megablox game we did is almost ready to get put up.

You're going to write random words?

random adjectives that make it more intresting

like he lost two of his droids to fire from the bows of piltogg's crusaders.
That is at least A LITTLE BETTER

Agreed.

K i finished slapping together a few sentences o its a bit better now and makes sense moar

Do you know what an adjective is?

Blitzen wrote:Do you know what an adjective is?

Apparently not. And maybe it's just me, but sometimes it's hard to tell which sentence is describing which picture.

The Final Line wrote:Jophfy are the Winser

I lol'd

I was responding to this:

piltogg wrote:random adjectives that make it more intresting

like he lost two of his droids to fire from the bows of piltogg's crusaders.
That is at least A LITTLE BETTER

I don't know which interesting adjectives he was talking about.

I was saying that piltogg apparently doesn't know what an adjective is.

piltogg wrote:like he lost two of his droids to fire from the bows of piltogg's crusaders.

There's maybe one adjective in there.

Better now, but i can't still figure out most of the action...Like the movements.