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This is my first Magic SOB, however I am open to constructive (or not-so-constuctive) criticism.

On that note, some of my photos failed to upload, so sorry if it seems a bit jumpy or confusing at first.

I am also going through my uni exams, so the whole story is likely to take a while for new parts to show up. Also this entire story had already been thought up and played out through little scenario battle almost 3 years ago. This is the reason why a) many of the parts might do better as a battle report and b) some of the story may slightly resemble Shadowsycthe's "Beginnings" any resemblance is purely koincidental and down to the old saying. "Great minds think alike. And fools never differ"

Now with that out of the way, on to the story!


WWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!



CLUNK!


Muffled voices from inside: A ssstolen RSssGA ssship! really?! Don't you think that a sssship that has been retessssted sssstolen might be a little sssssuspicious?


(The unidentified personnel depart the ship)



???: Possibly, but my little distractions will keep the military forces busy for long enough my good kommander.

Kommander Rasgarn: Humpt! You ssseem to have a lot of faith in the local OASISssss forcesss... even enough to let them guard the ssssite before we get here.



???: Don't listen to him soldier, you are worth your pay... obviously he does not remember that WE are funding the return of his general.

OASIS bloke: you da boss.

Rasgarn:



???: Then where is your old boss?

OASIS bloke: Inside, awaiting your arrival. Boss.



???: Come Kommander, we have work to do. Bring that stretcher!

Snake: Yessss Bossssssss!

Rasgarn:

Meanwhile...





'Bbbullbble!'




'Bulb!'




"Kingdom 1, kingdom 2, this is kingdom 3... do you copy?"




"This is kingdom 1, I'm in position. Scanners have confirmed signatures. Any word from command kingdom 2? Do you copy kingdom 2?"




"We copy kingdom 1, command has given us green light. I repeat Green light, waiting for your "go" kingdom 1"




"Then lets do this."

Oasis Boss: "How did the cleanup go?"

Oasis loyalist: "We have cleaned the blaster burns, and are moving on to the bodies, curiously there are no TGIA casualties or bloodspots where they might be."




"Humm... thats not good, I don't like this..."

"Me neither boss"




"Ok, well get the area secured, we only need to be here as long as they take to get the General and get out."

"Ya boss!"



???: "everything alright?"

Oasis Boss: "Yer, there seems to be some suspicious findings in the detective work, but no sign of hostiles."




???: "Good, remember there are high powers betting on this, so don't let it fail.

"Of course! right this way!"

Rasgarn (aside): "I don't like thisssss"

???: "I'm beginning to think you don't want your general back Rasgarn."




Boss: "Here he is!"

Rasgarn: "Decapitated! how in the name of the Dice did that happen?"

???: "It makes no difference... Stretchers!! Get over here!!



Boss: "I'll leave you to it"




[____________________________________________]


A few moments later.....



OASIS Loyalist: "Boss, we have picked up a small vehicle heading this way on radar."

Boss: "Get the troops ready I don't want to be caught off g-"



SMMASSH!!

ZAP! ZAP!


[_________________________________]

OASIS: "Huh? whats that? I heard shooting!"




KA-BOOM!




BANG! BANG!



[_______________________________________]



Elsewhere...

BANG!
"AAAGGH!"



Kingdom 1???: Take that, Butthead!


[___________________________________________]


Rasgarn:"Whatssss going on?"

???: "We are under attack moron! Put your men on the defensive so we can get out of here!"




Rasgarn: "Get out? And how do you sssuppossse we do that?"




*tap*




Rasgarn: "Ah, I ssssssee"

The effects and shots are really well done.

Silverdream wrote:The effects and shots are really well done.

Thanks, I try to make up in effect quality what I lack in picture resolution/focus.

Kingdom 1: "Captain, have you got eyes on the target?"

Kingdom 2 captain: "Negative, target has given us the slip, but we have a heavy gunner keeping us pinned."




Kingdom 1: "Over there! going for the ship!"




"Kingdom 3, target is moving your way, prepare for hostile contacts!"

Kingdom 3: "We are aware Kingdom 1, hostiles already engaged"




KD 2 captain: "Kingdom 2, hold the boy guard. Kingdom 3, stop them from taking off!"

BANG!

"AAAGGGAHH!"




ZZAAAPPOW!




KD 1: "Dice! Kingdom 3 is down!"




In a blur of speed, the mysterious KD 1 jumps for the ascending ship.



CLUNK!

Rasgarn: "Hey Bossssss, sssomthing hit our door."




???: "Then be polite and let them in."

KD 1: "Uh-oh"




CLUNK!

Rasgarn: "Well, lookssss like our helmeted hero character hassss paid us another vissssit, it will be a pleassssure dealing with you."




KD1: "the name's Nattus..."

BZZZTT!




"... And for the record..."

Rasgarn: "AAAGGAHHAGH!




*kick*

"I hate snakes"

Nattus: "Ok you scumbags, time for you to meet the dice."

???: "Not yet dice-sucker!"




BBZZZZZZZTTTT!!

Nattus: AAARRRGGHH!




???: "He is done for..."




*Splash!*

???: "No one has survived a blast from my staff..."




???: "...No one"






End of Part 1!