F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters...

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F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters...

Post by Insert_blank » Thu Sep 15, 2016 9:02 am

Forum 14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters (And Super Creeps) Part 1
Last time: http://brikwars.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=14502
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Ben: “Uh.... what?”
Jen: “We don't really have time. We're deep in enemy territory and we need to go. Now.”
Ben: “But-”

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Soldier: “Ma'am we're detecting a large enemy ship approaching.”

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Jen: Listen! You can argue with me later but for now we're going!”

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Ben: “Whatever, lady. I don't know who you are. Why should I follow you?”

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A large ship swoops down, engines thrumming. The stench of ozone is thick in the air.

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Soldier: “Prepare to fire on enemy craft!”

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Before anyone can blink, a laser barrage erupts from the ship, easily felling a soldier.

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The ship touches down without firing another shot. A large dust cloud envelopes the area.
Soldier: “Steady now, prepare for enemy contact.”
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The hatch lowers. Shapes can be seen in the darkness of the ship. A loud, steady metallic sound emanates from the maw of the craft.

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A familiar group of troopers jog down the ramp and begin firing.

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The storm across the battlefield.

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Woman Knight: “I want the girl alive. Kill the rest of them.”
Chrome Trooper: “Yes, Ma'am!”

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Woman Knight: “She won't escape us this time. You, what's your name? Bring the girl to me. Take care of it personally.”

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Annoyed Man: “As you wish, commander.”

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Ben: “I changed my mind. I'll go with the people who aren't shooting at me.”
Jen: “Good idea, sir.”

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Ben: “Why do you keep calling me that?”
Jen: “Shut up and get in the Hammerhead.”

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Jen hops into her own fighter and takes off.

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Others follow suit.

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Soldier: “Cover our retreat. All troops return to the Hammerhead.”

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Pilot: “We're clear. Commencing take-off.”

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The three ships zoom off planet.

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Annoyed Man: “....”

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On another world the ruins of an ancient castle rest.

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Fighter Pilot: “Class-M planet confirmed. Breathable atmosphere. This is a perfect place to re-charge our engines.

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Jen lands her ship as well.

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The bulky Hammerhead sets itself down laboriously, obviously low on energy.

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Glasses-Wearing Soldier: “No life signs detected. We're all alone.”

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Jen: “What was this place? Sally can we get an analysis?”

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Sally Saturn: “Nothing on records, Ma'am. The structure is made of material easily found in the area. Terrestrial origin confirmed. Perhaps an ancient civilization long since died out?”

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Ula Uranus: “As long as we can re-charge our fold engines it doesn't really matter what happened herein the past, does it?”

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An ancient piece of machinery lurches to life.

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...and fires!

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Soldier: “I'm hit!”

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Ula: “I thought this was a deserted temple!”

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Sally: “Locking on...”

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Sally: “And fire!”

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Sally: “Target neutralized.”

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Another solider goes down. A strange piece of metal is sticking out of his torso.

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Jen: “Another machine?!”

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Atop the main spire, a blue figure stands balanced, one leg perched on the stone, the other floating in the air.

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Another piece of metal comes zooming towards the group. Ben pushes the others out of the way and raises his staff.
Ben: “Shield!”

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Jen: “What are these things? What a crude form of weaponry.”

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The blue figure is suddenly in front of the group.

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Jen: “Wah!”

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Sally: “Freeze! You're surrounded!”

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With a flash of his blade, the blue figure cuts down his foes.
B.F.: “I've been waiting a long time for you.”

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Aokaze: “I am Aokaze. I am the descendant of an ancient clan of ninjas sworn to protect you, Master Ben.”

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Ben: “Then why did you attack my friends?”
Aokaze: “These are your allies? I had no idea.”

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Ula: “Drop your weapon and surrender.”

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Ben: “Wait! He said he wants to protect me. You're all the same, right?”

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Aokaze removes the weapon and applies some green paste onto the wound.

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Soldier: “Hey, I feel fine!”

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Aokaze does the same for the other downed troop.

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Aokaze: “I must apologize. My name is Aokaze, a ninja trained in the shadow arts to serve as a body guard to Master Ben.”

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Ben: “Why is everyone here to protect me? What makes me so special?”
Jen: “I have order not to reveal anything until we arrive at our destination. Sally, Ula check our fold engines. Let's see if we can speed this up.”

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Jen: “Here, use this.”
Ben: “What are those things you're using anyway? A gun? I'll keep my staff, thanks.”

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Jen: “If you insist. I don't understand how you can put any faith in magic.”

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Sally: “Ma'am we're detecting the same ship from before. They've found us.”
Jen: “Fold status?”
Sally: “98% on the Hammerhead. The Norns are ready.”

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Jen: “Everyone get ready.”

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The troopers storm onto alien soil.

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A gunner emerges from the bowels of the ship.

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Aokaze sprints into action.

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As he complete his Hurricane Strike, he turns his back to the enemy in true anime style.

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Chrome Trooper: “Bastard! Prepare to die!”

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Aokaze: “You were saying?”
Chrome Trooper: “Fire!”

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Aokaze leaps into the air, narrowly avoiding the fire blasts from the Flame Troopers.

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Aokaze: “Is that all you've got?”

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Annoyed Man: “That was only the warm-up. Why don't you dance with me a bit?”

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Jen: “Cover Aokaze!”

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The Annoyed Man blocks all the laser blasts with his laser sword.
Annoyed Man: “Tch. Nothing personal kid but you are messing with a Sith Lord.”

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Annoyed Man: “Now, shall we dance?”

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More troopers pour out of the ship.

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The two men duel.

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Jen: “Fold status now!”
Ula: “100% Ma'am. Let's get out of here!”

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Jen jumps into her fighter and opens fire on the enemy ship.

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Ben: “Aokaze, we're leaving!”
Aokaze: “Yes, master!”

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Ben: “Hurry!”

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Ben: “Go back, he won't make it!”

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Aokaze leaps into the air.

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Aokaze: “I have returned, master.”

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Ula: “And we're away.”

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Annoyed Man: “Damn, not again.”

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Annoyed Zebra: “I'm really starting to live up to my name.”


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Location: Unknown
The Woman Knight and her body guard walk down a dimly lit hallway.

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Book-Holding Knight: “Why are you disturbing the master?”
Woman Knight: “I think something has happened. We found a strange boy with the Neptune girl while on patrol.”

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A strong voice emanates from the solid black helmet.
???: “A boy you say? Was he carrying a golden staff with a green crystal on it?”
Woman Knight: “Yes, master.”
???: “Interesting. Then it's finally time. You will need more men if you're going to capture the boy and bring him to me.”

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???: “Take TastySkippy and TheVengefulOne with you.”

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???: “These Sith will assist you as well.”

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Woman Knight: “By your order, master. The First Order will capture the boy and bring him to you.

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???: “So... he finally appeared. The promised time is approaching. It will finally be able to make my presence felt in the Brikverse once more! Or my name isn't QS!Ham!”

End Part 1
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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by AnnoyedZebra » Thu Sep 15, 2016 11:32 am

So Ham is the lord of the noobs?
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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by lordintype » Thu Sep 15, 2016 2:42 pm

Can I feature sometime ?
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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by Overwatch_Elite » Thu Sep 15, 2016 4:07 pm

lordintype wrote:Can I feature sometime ?
honestly that would be a pretty lordintype thing to happen i say go for it

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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by Insert_blank » Thu Sep 15, 2016 5:50 pm

lordintype wrote:Can I feature sometime ?
It's not exactly a choice I consciously make so much as it depends on what's happening in the forum at the time I write it. If you're annoying or cool enough you'll probably show up.
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Post by TastySkippy123 » Thu Sep 15, 2016 6:06 pm

:omnom:

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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by Ham » Thu Sep 15, 2016 8:41 pm

wow I hope this ham character ends up getting the shota in the end, I'm looking forward to the continuation of this doujin
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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by Overwatch_Elite » Thu Sep 15, 2016 9:24 pm

yeah it has my favorite character female ham (male)

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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by Kommander Ken » Thu Sep 15, 2016 10:18 pm

Hahaha, love the reveal of Zebra and the rest. Good stuff as usual, ib.

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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by bann154 » Thu Sep 15, 2016 10:31 pm

Must say Zebra is very entertaining haha
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Re: F14: Final Arc: Hallo Spaceboy Chapter 1: Scary Monsters

Post by TheCraigfulOne » Tue Oct 11, 2016 6:24 pm

Hey! Almost a whole month since this was posted and nobody told me I was in this? Well I guess that's what I get for not checking this sub more often.

I'm flattered honestly, great work with everything here. :studgod:

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