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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star (A Colette Short)

Post by ikensall » Tue Sep 08, 2015 1:02 pm

I'll read it later, I just wanted to say that I read this as "Twinkie, Twinkie, Little Star" reads "Twinkie Twinkie Little Star"

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star (A Colette Short)

Post by Kommander Ken » Tue Sep 08, 2015 8:17 pm

:omnom:

Lovin' this.

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star (A Colette Short)

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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star (A Colette Short)

Post by Insert_blank » Thu Sep 10, 2015 12:21 am

I still think you shouldn't do accents. How is 'e pronounced? If you're going for an "Italian" accent it should be like de.

Also i didn't realize tratt high school girls were weebs.
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Re: Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Star (A Colette Short)

Post by Natalya » Thu Sep 10, 2015 1:09 pm

Colette wrote:Sayaka and Takada go to the jewelry store.
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