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A collection of IRL Lego dioramas I've constructed. I guess I'll see what you guys think. First one's on the house:

Death on Mark
Location: Jutland Square, █████████, Planet Mark, Danish Empire, Western Arm
Date: 04/17 B.R. 2,014

A tiny squad of Emerians that possibly came out of combat on Planet Mark's surface encounter (or were responsible for) a gruesome scene of destruction and carnage in the form of a collapsed building and dismembered bodies. It is likely that these were looters, peach refugees, and stubborn Danes who refused to evacuate from the area depicted here.

Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

Colette wrote:Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

Overwatch_Elite wrote:Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

Fine. Fixed.

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama, or are you here to bitch about text I wrote while half conscious?

Vami IV wrote:

Colette wrote:Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

Overwatch_Elite wrote:Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

Fine. Fixed.

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama, or are you here to bitch about text I wrote while half conscious?

If the chest in the center s metallic gold be careful with it, those things scratch really easily.

Vami IV wrote:Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama,

Do you want the polite comment.
Or the rude comment.

See, I'm so polite I'm giving you a choice

Silent-sigfig wrote:

Vami IV wrote:

Colette wrote:Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

Overwatch_Elite wrote:Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

Fine. Fixed.

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama, or are you here to bitch about text I wrote while half conscious?

If the chest in the center's metallic gold be careful with it; those things scratch really easily.

Yup, it's kinda scratched up already

Tzan wrote:

Vami IV wrote:Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama,

Do you want the polite comment.
Or the rude comment.

See, I'm so polite I'm giving you a choice

Really, Tzan?

Fuck it. Post like an overly polite gentleman.

Krap, I don't really have a polite comment ready.

I will say that I get what you were going for, but a diorama should be more organized and less cluttered.
Its hard to read the image with just a pile of stuff there.
If there were wall and roof sections that were bent into the hole it would read as a collapsed building more than just a few hand fulls of individual bricks tossed in.

Tzan wrote: I will say that I get what you were going for, but a diorama should be more organized and less cluttered.
Its hard to read the image with just a pile of stuff there.
If there were wall and roof sections that were bent into the hole it would read as a collapsed building more than just a few hand fulls of individual bricks tossed in.

I was going to say this before I saw the chest, mine got all scratched up

Hm. This is good feedback. I'll scoop up the debris, build a semblance of a first floor, and then place debris.

Yeah check pictures of actual rubble and bombed out buildings and go from there.

Or, another thing you could do is to build a building and then smash it.

Yeah I agree with zupps. Honestly it's not bad though. I like how the floor looks covered in blood. I also always stick blades in the gap between torso and legs when I play with my legos.

It is a nice picture.

So,
you don't want to see the rude comment?