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Briktopian Mech

Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:36 pm
by Apollyon
First mech i ever built. Sorry for the lighting, i never get around taking pics by day. :-/

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EDIT:
Stats plz!?!

size: 3
size level: 3
armor level : 3d10
move: 8"

quad gun: size 4 - use 6 - range 15" - damage 4d6
"heat lance": size 4 - use 5 - range CC - damage 4d6
crotch gun: use 3 - range 6" - damage 2d6 (meant as anti infantry weapon, maybe overpowered?)

Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:58 pm
by birdman
Why does it have three penises?

Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:28 pm
by AdrianTheGeek
Besides the weird penis-looking lasers, it is amazing. It's hard to believe that it's your first mech. Get rid of the penis lasers and it gets a 10/10.

Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:49 pm
by Warhead
I really like this, the Cockpit is pretty different from all the others I've seen. Penis lasers... yeah... um, o-kay.

BTW, the Deadly Spaceman would have humped it's leg off.

Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 7:02 pm
by Ranger S2H
Id make the legs a little bigger, they're a bit thin IMO

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:44 am
by piltogg
the core is good, the rest relies way too heavilly on the "action figure" limbs, add a whole lot of armor plateing so it wont be as obvious. Then it would be much better.

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 12:46 pm
by Magic Soap
Three penises, well... they do say two heads(LOL) are better than one!

Very good, but three things(LOL):
1.Penis(LOL) Lasers
2.Multicolours
3.Heavy use of Bionicle ball(LOL) and socket joints.

The bionicle joints can be the difference between good, and a mecca mecha (See James+Burgundy for more information).

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:14 pm
by Apollyon
It does indeed look a little better with the crotch gun removed. I still think however that you are all spoiled by goold old puritan prudery.

Thanks for all the input. I did not know the joints come from Bionicle sets. The limbs could be made better i agree but i don't quite know how yet and i don't have the parts doing the job i have seen in catalogue photos of Exoforce mechs. Muliticolour? The Briktopian Armed Forces shall smite you for your impertinence with a yellow/grey Hammer of Discipline!

Anyway, i shall improve with the next one. Until then this one will eventually justify its existence by destroying lots of things!

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:42 pm
by Magic Soap
By multicolour, I meant the end of that weapon (The blue part looks out of place).

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:50 pm
by Apollyon
Magic Soap wrote:By multicolour, I meant the end of that weapon (The blue part looks out of place).
I see. That weapon is supposed to emit pure energy and heat at at the tip so i thought some bright transparent part would fit. It sits on a technic axle, what else could be put there to make it look awesome and dangerous?

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:51 pm
by Magic Soap
A pylon system, or a tesla weapon.

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:10 pm
by Apollyon
This is more awesome but still not color coordinated:

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Hm, i could make it awesome^4 by slapping four OTCs on it...

Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:13 pm
by Magic Soap
Yeah, a fist with OTC fingers.

Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 7:58 am
by lrdofbricks
good, but it might have gotten beat by that DEADLY SPACEMAN

Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:12 pm
by Magic Soap
Yeah, the dead corpse will trip up it's lanky legs.