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Natalya
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by Natalya » Sat Mar 23, 2013 7:10 pm
I'm trying to make a video game. I have help, except they haven't done anything yet, so for now I'm basically on my own. Anyway, my current project is to create a 3D player model so that I can rig a skeleton to it and then begin animating it. I can't really do much else until I have a working player model, otherwise there would be no ability to actually play the game. Some of you might have seen the work I was doing in the BrikWars Chat a few days ago, well I had to scrap that and start over. What I have now is much better IMO, but still needs a lot more work. Here's the new face:

I haven't got the ears done yet and I need to do more work on the eyes and eyebrows. Current hair is just a placeholder. The body this head will be attached to is here:

This is an older screen, now the upper body is done and the upper legs are done too.
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aoffan23
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by aoffan23 » Sat Mar 23, 2013 7:43 pm
My first suggestion is to make the eyes smaller. They also seem to droop down a little too much on the outside. I know you said they needed work, but I just thought I'd point out some specific things.
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Silverdream
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by Silverdream » Sat Mar 23, 2013 8:57 pm
Make the main character a trans-Pansexual.

lol j/k
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Tzan
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by Tzan » Sat Mar 23, 2013 9:03 pm
On the face and dress it looks like you modeled one side then mirror copied to the other side, which is fine.
But it looks like you have a hard edge between the two sides.
You need to make that smooth over.
I don't know what modeler you use.
It might involve just selecting everything and setting to the same smoothing group.
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Natalya
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by Natalya » Sun Mar 24, 2013 1:04 am
Oh yeah that won't be there when it's done. All I need to do is weld the vertices.
Eyes won't be so big in the end either.
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Magic Soap
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by Magic Soap » Sun Mar 24, 2013 10:29 am
I was staring into those eyes for a while, then shifted my focus and began to feel like I was falling through time and space.
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Zupponn
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by Zupponn » Tue Mar 26, 2013 5:09 pm
Make the boobs bigger. That will definitely make the game more popular.