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Post by ace121 » Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:03 pm

Me and my mates have been planning a little web series for a while, The Rainbow and Leprechaun Show. Finally got around to filming a couple of days ago, and after much editing, I am proud to present the video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WzIkxu_PSGY

Yes, it is actually meant to be the fourth episode, and yes, there is a bit too much background noise in one or two scenes, and yes, Pot O Gold needs to speak up and learn to act, but I am proud nonetheless...

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated.

PS: For those of you wondering what I look like, I am Leprechaun (The tall good looking white kid).
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Post by Blitzen » Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:36 pm

You have funny hair.
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Post by Tarren » Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:00 pm

OSNAP LEON HAIR LOLOL
Silverdream wrote:As you can see the majority of sex workers in BC are not only children, but aboriginal children. It's mostly because we treat them like shit.

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Post by pesgores » Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:06 pm

My critique can be summed up to three words:

WTF?
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Post by Bonn-o-Tron » Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:35 pm

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The resemblance is uncanny...
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Post by OneEye589 » Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:39 pm

Blecht.

1. Have more than one thing between scenes. "PSHSHSHSHSHSHSH"
2. You all need some acting lessons.
3. Why are you all reading an essay as you are on screen?

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Post by Bonn-o-Tron » Sat Nov 08, 2008 9:35 pm

If you're going to be reading your lines as you go, try to go about it more subtle.
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Post by ace121 » Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:08 am

Well, yes indeedy, we definitely needed to practice the lines a good bit more (Some of us more than others...cezar). And a little more talent would definitely help. Your criticism is duly accepted. The next one will be much better... Now to get some decent actor friends...

PS: Who is that guy you are likeneing me to, Bonn-o? Although I do agree, the resemblance is uncanny...

PPS: Of course I would never personally blame myself for any lacking in a team effort no matter how terribly I did. My ego would simply not allow it. I have issues.
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Post by Bonn-o-Tron » Mon Nov 10, 2008 7:51 am

Leon Kennedy, from Resident Evil 4.

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Post by ace121 » Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:52 pm

Cool. I knew zombies were out to get me.
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Post by Tarren » Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:21 pm

Actually, I'm going to play through that game for the PS2 for the third time rite nao xD
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