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So, me and bud of mine are having some difficulties forming a band, yet we already have some original work and some covers being developed. Our first original is a song I wrote called "Generation Kill". We are still getting trough riffs and overall musical work, but things are coming together. We will record it once the KORG Mini Pandora is available in music stores.

Here are the lyrics, hope you guys feel something, I was totally focused, it basically wrote itself up...

WIP
Rhythm: about 160 bpms
Generation Kill
By Bernardo "Fenix" Silva (Rhythm guitarist and Vocals) and "Petre" Duarte (Lead guitarist)

WIP introduction

Guitar#1n2
Damnation
At your door, fallout eminent
Salvation
Now long lost, flew with the wind
Predation
Forever more, preys of false gods
Generation
Cursed at birth, all the pain they brought

Riff#1
What happened to this Generation?
Where is the sweat, blood and tears?
Taught by violence shaped by fear
Made to Kill

Riff#2
WIP riff
Generation Kill
Generation Kill
Generation Kill, Kill, Kill, yeah

Guitar#1n2
Body
Fake, unpure. Manufactured
Soul
Insane, not free. Prefabricate
World
Utopia, unreachable desire
Man
All spent shell, cartridge burnt trough fire

Riff#1
Riff#2

Guitar#1n2
God's
Will undone, where is he now?
Seal
Forged by war, the beast of flame
Mind
Playing tricks, your puppet I am not
Memory
Scars so deep, my reality

Riff#1
Riff#2

SOLO

Riff#2
WIP ending

C&C would be much appreciated and taken in mind!

First off, your English is really good.

Second, the lyrics are very... bloody and newage. Not my style, but I can see the appeal to your average teenager. Good stuff!

I can't wait to hear it.

Olothontor wrote:First off, your English is really good.

Second, the lyrics are very... bloody and newage. Not my style, but I can see the appeal to your average teenager. Good stuff!

I can't wait to hear it.

Ya think? Thank you very much! The song is meant to be aggressive, brutal and descriptive about the last, current and possibly coming generation.

I might want to work with you for some steampunk lyrics, actually, if you don't mind.

I think a music collab across the ocean would be really cool.

Olothontor wrote:I might want to work with you for some steampunk lyrics, actually, if you don't mind.

I think a music collab across the ocean would be really cool.

*highfives Olothontor* You got it dude, send 'em over!

BFenix wrote:*highfives Olothontor* You got it dude, send 'em over!

::highfives back:: Sent.

Looks like a good song so far, can't wait to see it finished!

Wat is teh vocals style pls

Magic Soap wrote:Wat is teh vocals style pls

Knowing BFenix and his proclivities it's probably very heavy metal. Not quite screamo, but very guttural.

Can't say for sure, though.

I'd love to see more Nickelback-style rock done in this lyrical style, but that requires a really good, probably trained vocalist.

More specifically then, are the lyrics to be: screamed, shouted, sung melodically, growly, death metal, auto tuned, rapped????

Magic Soap wrote:More specifically then, are the lyrics to be: screamed, shouted, sung melodically, growly, death metal, auto tuned, rapped????

I like to shout, but no, no screamo. I think my voice style is a mix between Nickelback and Metallica

Oh good, screaming for the most part is borderline faggotry.

Magic Soap wrote:Oh good, screaming for the most part is borderline faggotry.

I like to balance things. Not a pussy boy band voice neither a screamo machine of pure noise. The best way for you guys to know is to wait till I record it

By screamo, I meant these weird bands who have singers who have such wasted bodies, jet black hair and very tight jeans, yet they can shout quite loudly, squeal about how their lives are so bad, how they want to end it all yet they make a fair bit of money being in an emo rock band...

Magic Soap wrote:By screamo, I meant these weird bands who have singers who have such wasted bodies, jet black hair and very tight jeans, yet they can shout quite loudly, squeal about how their lives are so bad, how they want to end it all yet they make a fair bit of money being in an emo rock band...

*vomit*