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Posted: **Tue Mar 15, 2011 1:18 pm**

Forged of the Fire
by ~RWL

Feel the heat, flow into the world.

Feel the wind, forged of Fire

Stand tall, bask in the warmth of the birthing flames.

Stand strong, endure the scouring winds.

Give in, whisper into dust.

Gather the shards, feel the weight of brethren.

Come together, join the family.

Feel the strength, Build the binds.

Flee the wind, go to ground.

Gather together, THe pressure is on.

Feel the heat, Feel the flow.

Return to beginnings, complete the circle.

A poem I made for geography about the rock cycle.

Posted: **Tue Mar 15, 2011 2:12 pm**

this post is entirely acceptable for what i just read.

Posted: **Tue Mar 15, 2011 3:18 pm**

Thank you,

I have made a second draft/added a stanza:

Forged of Fire

Feel the heat, flow into the world.

Feel the wind, forged of Fire

Stand tall, bask in the warmth of the birthing flames.

Stand strong, endure the scouring winds.

Give in, whisper into dust.

Gather the shards, feel the weight of brethren.

Come together, join the family.

Feel the strength, build the binds.

Flee the wind, go to ground.

Gather together, the pressure is on.

Propagate Change, Adapt to survive.

Feel the movement, delve to the depths.

Reach the end, Find the Forge

Feel the heat, feel the flow.

Return to beginnings, complete the circle.

Better or worse?

Posted: **Tue Mar 15, 2011 3:33 pm**

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