[M] - Sleeping with the Enemy

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[M] - Sleeping with the Enemy

Post by Kastrenzo » Wed Feb 05, 2020 10:50 pm

Once again, I am trying the comic format, I would greatly appreciate feedback if you like this style or not, to be honest I'd rather do this as I think it looks nicer, but if it just breaks tradition of the soap too much, I am willing to go back to the old style, My flickr following may not like it though

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Re: [M] - Sleeping with the Enemy

Post by Kastrenzo » Wed Feb 05, 2020 10:51 pm

Post reserved for second half

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Last edited by Kastrenzo on Sun Feb 16, 2020 12:27 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: [M] - Sleeping with the Enemy

Post by Arkbrik » Thu Feb 06, 2020 7:06 am

I like the comic style, stick with it!

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Re: [M] - Sleeping with the Enemy

Post by ninja_bait » Thu Feb 06, 2020 12:51 pm

Works okay. My feedback is that the order is not always right for the bubbles - it would be better if it always reads left-to-right. Also that first picture looks like a photobucket watermark :lol:
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Re: [M] - Sleeping with the Enemy

Post by Kastrenzo » Fri Feb 14, 2020 3:25 pm

second third posted. The remainder is due to be posted tonight
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Re: [M] - Sleeping with the Enemy

Post by Kastrenzo » Sun Feb 16, 2020 12:29 am

updated the second post with the rest of the slides, this is done now
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