[RK20][Anno] A desperate defence

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[RK20][Anno] A desperate defence

Post by AnnoyedZebra » Wed Feb 19, 2020 4:30 am

After their contested landing, Fleder and his baka boys waste no time ravaging the countryside. At this rate of advance they are likely to reach the capital's spaceport before Anna and Klara have time to get a ship out of there.

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Units of the Südberg Security Force(SSF) scramble to meet the oncoming threat and buy the capital a little more time

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Dietrich Geyer, a grizzled veteran of the German wars against Ayanami now finds himself leading a force against his former allies. Oh well, he never liked those Shikinami freaks anyway, Südberg has always been a Soryuist planet and no far off Bishop is gonna change that.

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The forces meet at an abandoned farmstead

SHIKINAMI TURN 1


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The baka boys move forwards, setting up overwatch positions and hoping to tear apart the oncoming SSF team

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Fleder sets the trees alight with a well placed laser blast, creating an additional hazard. FEAT SUCCESSFUL

SÜDBURG TURN 1

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Dietrich slices through the air with inhuman speed, creating a vacuum that starves the fire.

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The armoured frame jumps forwards into a hail of ineffective gunfire.

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Two baka boys are torn apart by machine gun fire, one having been heroically sacrificed by Fleder grabbing him for a shield

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Emboldened, SSF troopers move forwards to set up their own return fire positions

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End of turn 1 Overwatch

SHIKINAMI TURN 2

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One baka boy is pushed out of cover by his comrades and miraculously survives all the return fire

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The baka boys gun down an SSF trooper

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The heavy readies his weapon to fire next turn

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Fleder fucks it up, what a clown FEAT FAILED

SÜDBURG TURN 2

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The frame dashes to the other side of the battlefield to gun down more baka boys

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Dietrich slowly advances, glaring at a baka boy so fiercely that he turns and runs. At this point Fleder decides that discretion is the better part of valour and also runs and decides to tactically withdraw pending the arrival of reinforcements

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End of game Overwatch

The baka boys are temporarily driven off, giving time for Anna and Klara to escape with their precious message and for the capitals beleaguered guardians to shore up their defences
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Re: [RK20][Anno] A desperate defence

Post by Scribonius » Sat Feb 22, 2020 1:27 pm

Judgy McJudger-time.

Not a bad battle report. Little sparse on background, but nice.

Fun: 15 Not a bad report, but not a lot of action, and could have used more destruction. And more Lego.
Violence: 7 Lots of shooting, some blood, but no explosions, no terrain destruction...
Photo: 8 Good pics, fairly clean shots, good lighting.
Writing: 8 We have a plot. Could use some more descriptions of wild actions and stuff, but otherwise pretty good.
Story: 6 There's a story there, but it is kind of thin. The background was decent, but not a lot of context.

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Re: [RK20][Anno] A desperate defence

Post by MadMario » Sun Feb 23, 2020 5:27 am

Fun : 14 - A neat and tidy battle report at all, yet a little sparse
Violence : 6 - Could´ve used a little more action at some point, the effects are on spot
Photography : 8 - the Pics are clear and well-lit, making it easy to follow the action
Writing : 7 - A little short and stiff yet straightlined plot.

Story : 7 - All in all a nice quick set up battle!
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Re: [RK20][Anno] A desperate defence

Post by AnnoyedZebra » Sun Feb 23, 2020 9:59 am

the story is following on from the linked soap btw
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Re: [RK20][Anno] A desperate defence

Post by Careful_Blacksmith » Tue Feb 25, 2020 9:30 am

Fun: 16 Short and sweet report, could have been a little longer though. Maybe with more troops or terrain
Violence: 8 Great use of fire and blood effects
Photo: 8 Great, clean pics. Kinda bland background though.
Writing: 8 Writing was good, actions were described well.
Story: 5Not much in the way of story, good background but didn't seem too connected with the report.

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Re: [RK20][Anno] A desperate defence

Post by AnnoyedZebra » Wed Feb 26, 2020 12:33 pm

as I said, there is plenty of story in the linked soaps which this carries on from
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