Episode 9: Test Run - Revision history

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← Older revision		Revision as of 18:15, 28 July 2018
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	'''Operator soldier:''' Channel is opening. In 3... 2... 1... Channel is opened.		'''Operator soldier:''' Channel is opening. In 3... 2... 1... Channel is opened.

−	~~To be continued...~~	+	Next: [[Episode 10: End of the Rebellion]]

← Older revision		Revision as of 22:39, 11 March 2017
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	[[File:Testrun13.jpg]]		[[File:Testrun13.jpg]]
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		+	[[File:Testrun14.jpg]]
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		+	Captain Aris was waiting for the arrival of the Commander Eegon and Adjutant Yoshi.
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		+	[[File:Testrun15.jpg]]
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		+	'''Captain Aris:''' Welcome to the base three, Commander. Adjutant Yoshi.
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		+	''Captain makes a military salute and commander makes one in return.''
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		+	[[File:Testrun16.jpg]]
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		+	'''Commander Eegon:''' Are everythig ready for the test run, Captain?
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		+	'''Captain Aris:''' Yes commander. We can start right away. This way please.
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		+	''Captain Aris shows the way to the control section of the warp gate.''
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		+	[[File:Testrun17.jpg]]
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		+	''Low ranking officer in the control section bows politely and shows the seats to the high ranking officers.''
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		+	[[File:Testrun18.jpg]]
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		+	[[File:Testrun19.jpg]]
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		+	'''Commander Eegon:''' We can start the standard test run procedures, captain.
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		+	'''Captain Aris:''' Soldiers, start the calculations.'''
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		+	'''Operator soldier:''' Yes. sir. Calculating the warp route coordinates.
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		+	'''Captain Aris:''' Once the calculation complete. Activate the Intergalactic telecommunication array.'''
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		+	[[File:Testrun20.jpg]]
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		+	'''Adjutant Yoshi:''' What is this calculation about.
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		+	'''Captain Aris:''' A supercomputer is calculating a route for stable warp connection between gates to open a warp portal.
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		+	[[File:Testrun21.jpg]]
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		+	'''Operator soldier:''' Calculations complete. Activating the telecommunication array.
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		+	'''Captain Aris:''' Good. Open a comm. channel to the Edelheim. Contact General Kaufman wheh the channel is opened.
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		+	'''Operator soldier:''' Channel is opening. In 3... 2... 1... Channel is opened.
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		+	To be continued...

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 ''Few time later. Commander Eegon and Adjutant Yoshi are on the way to base three where the first intergalactic warp gate on the planet is located.''
-[[File:Testrun06.jpg]]
+[[File:Testrun07.jpg]]
 '''Adjutant Yoshi:''' I want to thank you for bringing me to the test run of the gates, Commander.
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 '''Adjutant Yoshi:''' Yes they are beautiful. It strange that I don't see any yellow flowers lately.
-'''Commander Eegon:''' Yellow is also
+'''Commander Eegon:''' Yellow is also a nice color but I personally prefer red and white flowers.

← Older revision		Revision as of 17:27, 11 March 2017
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	'''Soldier:''' Yes, sir.		'''Soldier:''' Yes, sir.
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		+	[[File:Testrun06.jpg]]
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		+	'''Commander Eegon:''' ''(He talks to himself.)'' We have spent much effort. It's time to get some results.
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		+	''Few time later. Commander Eegon and Adjutant Yoshi are on the way to base three where the first intergalactic warp gate on the planet is located.''
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		+	[[File:Testrun06.jpg]]
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		+	'''Adjutant Yoshi:''' I want to thank you for bringing me to the test run of the gates, Commander.
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		+	'''Commander Eegon:''' Your efforts for the greater good including your help in building the bases are are appreciated by the Empire.
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		+	'''Adjutant Yoshi:''' Oh really. I was doing my job.
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		+	'''Commander Eegon:''' Be sure that you will receive your reward for your good deeds. By the way its already sprig time has arrived. I see flowers everywhere on the plains.
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		+	'''Adjutant Yoshi:''' Yes they are beautiful. It strange that I don't see any yellow flowers lately.
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		+	'''Commander Eegon:''' Yellow is also

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	'''Commander Eegon:''' Good.		'''Commander Eegon:''' Good.
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		+	''Commander put his notebook aside The live image of Commander Aris appears on transparent screen.''

	[[File:Testrun001.jpg]]		[[File:Testrun001.jpg]]

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 '''Commander Eegon:''' Yes?
-'''Soldier:''' Captain Aris, commander of base three, is on line to report sir.
+'''Soldier:''' Captain Aris, commander of base three, is calling to report sir.
 '''Commander Eegon:''' Good.

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 [[File:Testrun04.jpg]]
-'''Commander Eegon:''' Soldier. Send a call to Adjutant Yoshi to be ready. He will join us for the the test run.
+'''Commander Eegon:''' Soldier. Send a message to Adjutant Yoshi to be ready. He will join us for the the test run.
-'''Soldier:''' Yes, Sir.
+'''Soldier:''' As you wish, sir. When will we leave?

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	[[File:Testrun003.jpg]]		[[File:Testrun003.jpg]]
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		+	''After Commander Eegon examined the sheets for some time, he closed his computer and call the servant soldier.''
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		+	[[File:Testrun04.jpg]]
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		+	'''Commander Eegon:''' Soldier. Send a call to Adjutant Yoshi to be ready. He will join us for the the test run.
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		+	'''Soldier:''' Yes, Sir.

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 ''In the M-Throne Security Center on Kiironohoshi, the capitol planet of Yellow Sun Empire, Commander Eegon is working in his room. A soldier come into the room.''
-[[File:Testrun001.jpg]]
+[[File:Testrun00.jpg]]
 '''Commander Eegon:''' Yes?
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 '''Commander Eegon:''' Good.
-[[File:Testrun02.jpg]]
+[[File:Testrun001.jpg]]
 '''Captain Aris:''' Good day sir.
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 '''Captain Aris:''' All preperations are going as planned sir. We can proceed with the test run as scheduled.
-[[File:Testrun003.jpg]]
+[[File:Testrun02.jpg]]
 '''Commander Eegon:''' Good, Captain. You are doing a good job. Are the defensive systems' installments completed?
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 ''Commander Eegon, who has a engineer background himself opens and examines the datasheets of the new turrets.''
-[[File:Testrun04.jpg]]
+[[File:Testrun003.jpg]]