USA States - Revision history

Valiant at 04:51, 11 April 2015

2015-04-11T04:51:01Z

Colette at 04:03, 24 February 2015

2015-02-24T04:03:50Z

Colette at 04:02, 24 February 2015

2015-02-24T04:02:50Z

Colette at 03:53, 24 February 2015

2015-02-24T03:53:33Z

Vami iv: /* Florida */

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‎Florida

Vami iv: /* Texas */

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‎Texas

Vami iv: /* Alaska */

2015-02-14T20:24:23Z

‎Alaska

Colette at 12:54, 17 January 2015

2015-01-17T12:54:45Z

Vami iv: /* Alaska */

2015-01-15T16:41:37Z

‎Alaska

Vami iv: /* The West */

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‎The West

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−	This a compilation of descriptions of states in the [[United Systems Alliance]]. States are grouped into regions for reading convenience.	+	This is a compilation of descriptions of states in the [[United Systems Alliance]]. States are grouped into regions for reading convenience.

	==The Northeast==		==The Northeast==

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 ====Boston====
-Planet Boston is the capital of Massachusetts. It is also home to many famous higher institutions of learning, such as Harvard and MIT, that attract talent from across the [[BrikVerse]].
+Planet Boston is the capital of Massachusetts. It is also home to many famous higher institutions of learning, such as Harvard and MIT, that attract talent from across the [[BrikVerse]] and claim many notable alumni.
 == The Midwest ==

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	The entire state is best avoided.		The entire state is best avoided.
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		+	=== Massachusetts ===
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		+	====Boston====
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		+	Planet Boston is the capital of Massachusetts. It is also home to many famous higher institutions of learning, such as Harvard and MIT, that attract talent from across the [[BrikVerse]].

	== The Midwest ==		== The Midwest ==

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-=== Washaton D.C. ===
+=== Wash-a-ton D.C. ===
 The capitol system of the United Systems is home to every branch of the federal government, as well as the President's residence.
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 The planet Hollywood in the Los Angeles system has few permanent residents on the planet, with most of the inhabitants living in the space stations in orbit. The planet itself is used only for filming purposes. It was originally founded to avoid copyright claims from the Northeast.
 ===Alaska===
 Alaska is one of the most treacherous states in the USA.
 [[Category: Locations]]

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 === Florida ===
-This state is full of old people and retirement homes.
+This state is full of old people and retirement homes, as the younger people in the state have all been eaten by giant alligators or snakes.
 == The Capitol ==

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 What the United Systems Alliance is to the rest of the galaxy, Texas is to the United Systems alliance. Everyone here is a good 'ol country boy who owns a truck and wears cowboy hats. Texans are known for their ridiculous drawl and size.
-Texas possesses so much oil in its crust, that lakes of black gold dot its surface, in varying sizes. Roaming tribes of wandering Rednecks in their ten gallon hats often plague settlers and major cities on Texas, but the lazy and corrupt police force throughout the USA does next to nothing. In addition to these marauding bands of drunk savages, Texas, like New Mexico, Arizona, and California, it is plagued with illegal immigration from neighboring countries and exiles from [[Emeria]].
+The Texas the system is dotted with desert and temperate worlds, and is also infamous for the hordes of illegal immigrants from nations like [[Emeria]].
 === Alabama ===

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 ===Alaska===
-Alaska is one of the most treacherous worlds in the USA. In most regions, Alaska is nothing but a gigantic, mountainous wasteland covered in trees, ferocious beasts, and the ever vigilant Space Inuits of Alaska and [[Space Canada]]. However, Alaska is different from other Ice Worlds. Only about 2/3 of the planet is covered in mountains and miles of snow and ice. Despite not being completely frozen, Alaska is still regarded as being an Ice World due to the fact that it spends nearly ALL of each B.R in subzero temperatures that rival and even outmatch worlds like Michigan.
+Alaska is one of the most treacherous states in the USA. In most regions, Alaska is nothing but a gigantic, mountainous wasteland covered in trees, ferocious beasts, and the ever vigilant Space Inuits of Alaska and [[Space Canada]]. However, Alaska is different from other Ice Worlds. Only about 2/3 of its planetary surfaces are covered in mountains and miles of snow and ice. Despite not being completely frozen, Alaska is still regarded as having Ice Worlds due to the fact that it spends nearly ALL of each B.R in subzero temperatures that rival and even outmatch worlds like Michigan.
-Though the most uninhabited world in the United Systems Alliance, Alaska is also one of the richest and most rewarding. Like all Ice Worlds, Alaska has a decent amount of OT in it's surface of ice and snow, and countless precious resources buried in it's mountains and crust, far beneath the snow. Alaska, in addition to it's immense natural wealth, Alaska's wandering herds of mammoths also provide another, highly coveted resource: ivory.
+Though the most uninhabited state in the United Systems Alliance, Alaska is also one of the richest and most rewarding. Like all Ice Worlds, Alaska has a decent amount of OT in it's surfaces of ice and snow, and countless precious resources buried in it's mountains and crust, far beneath the snow. Alaska, in addition to it's immense natural wealth, Alaska's wandering herds of mammoths also provide another, highly coveted resource: ivory.
 [[Category: Locations]]

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 |'''Industries:'''
-| Entertainment, Retirement, Farming, Technology, Tourism, oil, Mining
+| Entertainment, Retirement, Farming, Technology, Tourism, Oil, Mining
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 The planet Hollywood in the Los Angeles system has few permanent residents on the planet, with most of the inhabitants living in the space stations in orbit. The planet itself is used only for filming purposes. It was originally founded to avoid copyright claims from the Northeast.
 [[Category: Locations]]