Avalon Found

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Avalon Found

Postby Semaj Nagirrac » Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:46 am

Time of Transmission Received: Unknown.
Location of Transmission Source: Edge of Galaxy.
Planet of Transmission Origin: Avalon.

The wars of the galaxy became too fierce. We chose to hide. We created the most powerful cloaking devices to erase ourselves from all memory of the galaxy. Behind our mask, we remained safe. We remained hidden until fate decided to find us.

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"I have brought you here today to discuss this Orange Transparent material that was recently discovered on our moon. The future of our existence now stands on the edge of a knife. If the foreigners were to learn of what we possess, it would mean the end of our people."

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"It is a curse! We must cover it up! It should be as if it were never found! We cannot risk exposure!"

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"Why not? Why must we continue to hide in the dark while the rest of the galaxy advances themselves? We should trade the Orange Transparent material for weapons and great riches! This is finally our chance to make the ancient emblems of our people the greatest and most respected in all the known universe!"

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"I fear that the symbol of our people is a relic and nothing more. If the foreigners truly wanted us to be a part of them again, then fate would have guided them here to Avalon."


Fate did guide the foreigners to us, but not as we had hoped. They swarmed us. And within days, our peaceful civilization collapsed.

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All we wanted was peace, but the foreigners brought war.

TRANSMISSION 241986.1129 IS ANYONE THERE?

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"Hello...? Hello....?"

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"My name is Semaj Nagirrac. My planet of Avalon has been... been... destroyed. We don't know who the foreigners are. All we know is they were after a transparent orange material we discovered on our moon. I'm not sure how valuable is, or how useful it could be. All I know is these... monsters have done everything in their power to get their filthy hands on it. This is a picture of their master."

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"His armor and weapon are made from this stuff. It is extremely strong and has devastated our forces."

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"If you receive this message, please help us. We have plenty of this material to supply you with if that is really what you foreigners want. Please heed our call. We have no other choice but to trust you."

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"Sir! We need to move out. Scouts indicate a heavy concentration of foreigners headed this way. They must be looking for survivors!"

END OF TRANSMISSION
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Postby Hoboman » Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:51 am

Interesting intro to your story. Look forward to more story of "Avalon".

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Postby beluga » Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:05 am

Damn, now you look like a pedo alt because I also decided to cloak what's left of my mostly destroyed empire, undetectable and only to be reintroduced when we have sufficient military to stand our ground.

Also, nice report, I like the pointless violence against civilians, although,

Semaj Nagirrac wrote:All we wanted was peace,


You will soon learn peace is the last thing this forum gives. Prepare...

Oh, welcome to the forums, please take the time to read the forum code and ACTUALLY follow it so you don't end up like me.

Edit: I thought orange-transparent was only found on iceworld and that's what made it special...

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Postby BFenix » Fri Mar 04, 2011 4:07 am

Cool intro dude, its nice to see a newcomer already posting great stuff! Please, present yourself to us in the "Introduce Yourself" thread

can't for more of this :)
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Postby Apollyon » Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:11 am

Wow, i live this intro! Well done and welcome to the forums.

Story reminds me a bit of Conan the Barbarian (foreigners looking for steel=OT ore). Oh, and i also tinkered with the idea of a full "set" of OT weapons/armor before but unlike you never actually did it. You should consider getting the OT helmet, too?
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Postby Ogel96 » Fri Mar 04, 2011 7:55 am

Aid is on the way.

Very nice opening, excellent camera work!
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Postby Bragallot » Fri Mar 04, 2011 8:24 am

Inquistadores have been sent to enslave the remaining Avalon people, they seem to be easy prey 8)
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Postby RunsWithLegos » Fri Mar 04, 2011 11:32 am

Nice intro man! the coalition can send help after we clean house.

Bragallot wrote:Inquistadores have been sent to enslave the remaining Avalon people, they seem to be easy prey 8)


Won't they have to fight the foreigners as well?
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Postby Swordsalmon » Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:34 pm

Welcome to the forum. ^_^ I like the story you've made. If only the people of Avalon realized the power of OT, then perhaps things may have changed for the better.
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Postby Cpl. Halan » Fri Mar 04, 2011 2:00 pm

Welcome to the forums. Watch your back and when in doubt, kill things. Great intro.
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Postby trebnos1 » Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:23 pm

Consortium Communique: Addressing Admiral Gaunt
I trust you have been monitoring the situation on this Avalon planet. I wish to attempt something of an experiment. Send in some agents--Team Malice is available--and see if you can't foment a little resistance. Keep the fight going awhile, then bring any promising rebels back for conditioning. Harsh situations breed warriors; perhaps we can capitalize.
Oh, and of course secure any of this
OT that you can, as the opportunity presents itself. Should any worthy Avalonian wish to hire us, he would be able to provide more than sufficient payment. Refer any potential contracts to me.
~Chief Gaul

/End Communique

EDIT: Oh yeah, great stuff, btw; love the intro. Welcome to the forum!
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Postby NapalmKing » Fri Mar 04, 2011 5:17 pm

The NSST has recently built new ships and secured a victory over the HBTE so we have some forces available until Ham701 launches a counter attack a fleet will be sent to be used at your command, IF you convert.
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Postby beluga » Fri Mar 04, 2011 7:27 pm

The Nyphilians and the Avalonians have allianced as brothers in hiding and victims of war, we have sent out an ambassador with an appropriate fleet escort to Avalon. This fleet escort also contains behemoth mining machines and a decent invasion force to assist against these new invaders.
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Postby Bragallot » Fri Mar 04, 2011 10:37 pm

RunsWithLegos wrote:Nice intro man! the coalition can send help after we clean house.

Bragallot wrote:Inquistadores have been sent to enslave the remaining Avalon people, they seem to be easy prey 8)


Won't they have to fight the foreigners as well?


Seems everyone is 'sending' their stuff: we'll just have to involve into a policy of hack and slash rather than difficult diplomatic stuff. Foreigner hero looked a little like a Vol so he should fit right in. Make sure to raise a white flag in case you're an ally of the Immortals though ;)

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Postby Warhead » Sat Mar 05, 2011 3:14 am

Smart little Pedo, maybe too smart. I'll bide my time, for now.
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