[MS] General Blut's Second Wave

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[MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Silverdream » Fri Feb 15, 2013 12:45 am

This is part one. Part two should be up tomorrow.

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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Scribonius » Sat Feb 16, 2013 8:09 pm

He's just going to keep trying to kill the Pwnies, isn't he? This should be fun! What happens next?
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Colette » Mon Feb 18, 2013 9:09 am

When will part 2 be up so I can judge this report?
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Silverdream » Mon Feb 18, 2013 12:11 pm

I've been really busy lately, but I'll try to get it up as soon as possible.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Colette » Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:05 pm

Silverdream wrote:I've been really busy lately, but I'll try to get it up as soon as possible.

Well, according to my timezone, you have 3 hours remaining to get up the second half or else I will have to judge as is.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Silverdream » Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:17 pm

Won't be completed for a while. I'm entering this as-is.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Colette » Thu Feb 21, 2013 9:51 pm

@Silva: I have put my judgement in a spoiler and ask that you do not read it on your honor until you have judged my own SOB.

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Photography: 2.5/5
Photos consistently blurry and dark, impedes ability to observe what is going on like Bonn-o-Tron.
Minifigs: 4.5/5
Minifigs are original but not stunning nor necessarily aesthetically pleasing.
Writing: 3.5/5
I can’t believe I gave this an equal writing score as When Diplomacy Fails, which was overall written much better, but I think a part of it is the fact that there is no “writing” to speak of, only dialogue. Dialogue would have been considered poorly written but in this context is actually quite authentic. I deducted points for the usage of LOL in spoken dialogue though.
Title: 5/5
Again, what can I say?
Overall Appeal: 3/5
Presented poorly and did not appeal to me. Lack of effort seems evident.

Total Score: 3.8
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Theblackdog » Fri Feb 22, 2013 1:52 am

Photography: 2.5/5. Blurry and dark, and the speech bubbles often got in the way of the action.
Minifigs: 5/5. General Blut looks fabulous as always, and Buzzsaw and Panter were cool too.
Writing: 4/5. Some great lines, but it ended way too early. I have to take points off somewhere for not getting the full story in.
Title: 4.5/5. It works, but it's not great.
Overall Appeal: 4/5.
total score: 20/25.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Arkbrik » Fri Feb 22, 2013 2:00 am

I want to see Part 2.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Silverdream » Fri Feb 22, 2013 3:08 am

Arkbrik wrote:I want to see Part 2.


It, and part three can come tomorrow maybe.
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby lawmaster » Sat Feb 23, 2013 1:08 pm

Minifigs: 5/5 Very good, loved all of them.
Photography: 3/5 I liked the comic book style but in the end it hindered your photos.
Writing: 3/5 Good story but not the best
Title: 4/5 It was an ok tittle
Overall appeal: 4/5

Total score: 19/25
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Re: [MS] General Blut's Second Wave

Postby Silverdream » Sun Feb 24, 2013 12:44 am

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If your wondering why a bunch of the defenders are wearing Mando helmets it's because they're the fabled Dandalorians.
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