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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by Natalya » Wed Jun 25, 2014 7:38 am

Is it the common convention these days to use lots of fluffy words?
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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by Brikguy0410 » Wed Jun 25, 2014 9:08 am

this is, so so beautiful i would of wrote this myself but a i am lazy and b i had tons of school work
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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by cleanupcrew » Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:17 pm

Natalya wrote:Is it the common convention these days to use lots of fluffy words?
Brikguy0410 wrote:this is, so so beautiful i would of wrote this myself but a i am lazy and b i had tons of school work
Apparently not.
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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by samuelzz10 » Thu Jun 26, 2014 2:07 pm

Colette wrote:
Natalya wrote:Is it the common convention these days to use lots of fluffy words?
Brikguy0410 wrote:this is, so so beautiful i would of wrote this myself but a i am lazy and b i had tons of school work
Apparently not.
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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by mgb519 » Thu Jun 26, 2014 10:39 pm

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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by motorhead fan » Mon Jun 30, 2014 5:56 am

This is very well written, needs less one sided battles and conveniently placed snipers though
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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by Vami IV » Mon Jul 14, 2014 7:52 pm

motorhead fan wrote:This is very well written, needs less one sided battles and conveniently placed snipers though
George R. R. Martin agrees.
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Re: [Maeby's Cannon] Line of Duty

Post by motorhead fan » Tue Aug 19, 2014 7:06 am

Sooooooooo is there more coming?
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