Vami's Dioramis

[Vami IV]

A collection of IRL Lego dioramas I've constructed. I guess I'll see what you guys think. First one's on the house:

Death on Mark
Location: Jutland Square, █████████, Planet Mark, Danish Empire, Western Arm
Date: 04/17 B.R. 2,014

A tiny squad of Emerians that possibly came out of combat on Planet Mark's surface encounter (or were responsible for) a gruesome scene of destruction and carnage in the form of a collapsed building and dismembered bodies. It is likely that these were looters, peach refugees, and stubborn Danes who refused to evacuate from the area depicted here.

[Overwatch_Elite]

Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

[cleanupcrew]

Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

[Vami IV]

Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

Fine. Fixed.

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama, or are you here to bitch about text I wrote while half conscious?

[Silent-sigfig]

Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

Fine. Fixed.

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama, or are you here to bitch about text I wrote while half conscious?

If the chest in the center s metallic gold be careful with it, those things scratch really easily.

[Tzan]

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama,

Do you want the polite comment.
Or the rude comment.

See, I'm so polite I'm giving you a choice

[Vami IV]

Honestly, why would they redact information as non sensitive as place and time of what seems to be a normal military action, especially post-fact?

Can you put "██-██-B.R.████" in the American time format?

Fine. Fixed.

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama, or are you here to bitch about text I wrote while half conscious?

If the chest in the center's metallic gold be careful with it; those things scratch really easily.

Yup, it's kinda scratched up already

Now, do you guys have anything to say about the diorama,

Do you want the polite comment.
Or the rude comment.

See, I'm so polite I'm giving you a choice

Really, Tzan?

Fuck it. Post like an overly polite gentleman.

[Tzan]

Krap, I don't really have a polite comment ready.

I will say that I get what you were going for, but a diorama should be more organized and less cluttered.
Its hard to read the image with just a pile of stuff there.
If there were wall and roof sections that were bent into the hole it would read as a collapsed building more than just a few hand fulls of individual bricks tossed in.

[Silent-sigfig]

I will say that I get what you were going for, but a diorama should be more organized and less cluttered.
Its hard to read the image with just a pile of stuff there.
If there were wall and roof sections that were bent into the hole it would read as a collapsed building more than just a few hand fulls of individual bricks tossed in.

I was going to say this before I saw the chest, mine got all scratched up

[Vami IV]

Hm. This is good feedback. I'll scoop up the debris, build a semblance of a first floor, and then place debris.

[Silent-sigfig]

Yeah check pictures of actual rubble and bombed out buildings and go from there.

[Zupponn]

Or, another thing you could do is to build a building and then smash it.

[Insert_blank]

Yeah I agree with zupps. Honestly it's not bad though. I like how the floor looks covered in blood. I also always stick blades in the gap between torso and legs when I play with my legos.

[motorhead fan]

It is a nice picture.

[Tzan]

So,
you don't want to see the rude comment?