The Jackpot
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Re: The Jackpot
Oh something is definitley brewing here.
I couldn't come up with anything smart, original or funny, so <=THIS=> is what you get.
ENJOY IT!!!
ENJOY IT!!!
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Re: The Jackpot
LOCATION: The Reef

Lund: "Are you certain that your men are up to the task?"

Ronin: "Calm down. My men are more than capable."
Lund: "I hope so."
Lund: "Away team, status update?"

Lund: "...team, status update?"
Clint: "Map says were in the junction proceeding the objective, but we're looking at a sealed door."

Lund:"Let me check the schematics."

Lund: "There should be a control booth above you. From there you should be able to access the corridor."
Clint: "I see it."

Clint: "Harris, go see what you can do up there. You go with him."

Harris: "Alright, I got it."

Lund: "Status report? Is it opening?"

Clint: "Yessir."
Ackerman: "We got some bodies."

Ackerman: "Well, this is weird."
Lund: "Bodies were expected, Ackerman."
Ackerman: "No, its not that."

Ackerman: "These bodies..."

Ackerman: "Where's the rest of them?"

Lund: "Are you certain that your men are up to the task?"

Ronin: "Calm down. My men are more than capable."
Lund: "I hope so."
Lund: "Away team, status update?"

Lund: "...team, status update?"
Clint: "Map says were in the junction proceeding the objective, but we're looking at a sealed door."

Lund:"Let me check the schematics."

Lund: "There should be a control booth above you. From there you should be able to access the corridor."
Clint: "I see it."

Clint: "Harris, go see what you can do up there. You go with him."

Harris: "Alright, I got it."

Lund: "Status report? Is it opening?"

Clint: "Yessir."
Ackerman: "We got some bodies."

Ackerman: "Well, this is weird."
Lund: "Bodies were expected, Ackerman."
Ackerman: "No, its not that."

Ackerman: "These bodies..."

Ackerman: "Where's the rest of them?"
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Re: The Jackpot
Finally, the next chapter! Great job as always Sigfig.
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Thug: "Kinda weird how the only thing keeping us from getting through is a keypad."
Lund:"Is that a problem?"
Thug: "Nah, I can get through. Still's weird to see this in a Trattorian station."

Ian: "This place predates the Tratts and their tech. Shit, I wouldn't be surprised to see a combination lock somewhere."


Clint: "Alright, we're in."

Lund: "Alright, let's get this mission done."



Lund: "See the objective?"
Ackerman: "I think so."

Lund: "Okay, give me a description."

Clint: "It's got a light red hue, and it seems to be pulsing sightly..."
Ian: "It's fucking pink and shiny."
Clint: "...And in a forcefield."
Lund: "There should be a terminal in the room, try to crack it from there."

Clint: "Got it."

Lund: "Okay, now place it in the case."
Clint: "That's it?"
Lund: "Yep. It should be inert, so there should be nothing to worry about."
Ronin techie: "Guys?"
Clint: "Should be?"
Lund: "Yeah, I mean out intel says..."

Ronin Techie: "GUYS!"
Lund: "...One minute Away team."

Lund: "...minute away team."
Clint: "Huh. Guess it is inert..."
*BEEP*

Ian: "The fuck was that?"
*BEEP*
Ackerman: "Shut Up!"

Ackerman: "...We've got company..."
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Nelac: "Laida, someone's in the booth."
Laida: "Got it."

Nelac: "Alright, prepare to move on my mark"
Nelac: "Three..."

Nelac: "...two..."

Nelac: "...one!"

Harris: "Ah shit. Was that gunfire?!"

Harris: "Shit shit shit! There are mercenaries out there!"
Thug: "..."
Harris: "Are you even..."

Harris: "...listening?"

Lund: "AWAY TEAM STATUS REPORT! WHAT"S GOING ON?!"

Lund: "What am I hearing?!"
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Lund: "Those mercenaries must have been hired by the 45th Union! They're the only other ones who know..."
Thug: "That's not helpful!"
Clint: "Harris! Report! What's going on!"

Harris: "Woah!"


Harris: "Gah!"

Nelac: "Keep 'em pinned!"

Mercenary: "Huh?"

Mercenary: "AAARGGH!"
Nelac: "FUCK!"

Ian: "Yo! Somethings happening out there!"

Lund: "More Mercenaries?"
Ian: "Fuck if I know!"
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Nelac: "YEARRGH"

Mercenary: "What the?"

Clint: "Harris, where the hell are you!? Report!"

Harris: "Shit!"



Laida: "Argh!"

Harris: "GRAH!"

Laida: "YAAAAH!"


Harris: "Clint!"
Clint: "What happened!?"
Harris: "I'm fine! But if you want to make it out..."

Harris: "...You gotta move, now!"
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Mercenary: "Come on, come on, just die!"





Clint: "ACKERMAN!"




Harris: "Ackerman?"
Clint: "Didn't make it."
Thug: "ARGHTA!"

Ronin Techie: "Just got word from the shuttle. All survivors are on board."
Ronin: "Send them to my personal hanger and have the doctors meet them there."

Lund: "Well, I'd say that worked out as well as it could have. How would you like your payment?"
Ronin: "Yeah..."

Ronin: "About that.."
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Lund: "What do you want?"

Ronin: "I want my current pay, doubled. On top of that I want 2 million for each man I lost on this job."
Lund: "Is that it?"
Ronin: "No, there's one small thing I'd like. A High-yield fleetbuster antimatter bomb."


Lund: Well...

Lund: "Here I was thinking it would be something unreasonable."
ELSEWHERE:
Bruce: "Enzo?"

Enzo: "Good news, I hope?"
Bruce: "I'm afraid not. The American's managed to recover whatever they were after before we even got to the system."
Enzo: "Hmn. I take it you have a plan to solve this...dilemma?"
Bruce: "I do, but..."

Bruce: "It's somewhat drastic."
LOCATION: Aboard the USV Slow Dawn

Clint: "Are you certain giving The Ronin the bomb was a good idea?"

Lund: "Absolutely."
Clint: "But what If he uses it against us?"
Lund: "He knows better than to bite the hand that feeds him. And besides, what we got is worth far more than what we paid."

Clint: "And what exactly did we get?"
Lund: "Oh, only the most unique item in the galaxy..."

Lund: "The last of the Nyphillian Antiimmortalium."
END
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Re: The Jackpot
Antiimmortalium? I hope you know what you're doing, Silent.
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Man, this is so excellent. Really well done. Your pacing is fantastic and you do a superb job of maintaining a sense of suspense. I also enjoy how complete each shot feels.
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Antimortallium is like a catastrophe magnet that destroyed a whole civilization. I hope Lund knows what bog of bullshit he's getting himself into.
Excellent soap, by the way. Photos were a little shaky at times, but that tends to happen in soaps with a lot of action.
Excellent soap, by the way. Photos were a little shaky at times, but that tends to happen in soaps with a lot of action.
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We'll be looking forward to seeing how this plays out, Sigfig.
Again, great job on the soap mate.
Again, great job on the soap mate.
Re: The Jackpot
This is 10 types of pornography, starting with Scenery pr0n and ending with Lore pr0n, amazingly done.
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Honestly, this is one of the best soaps I've seen.
This sig is too fucking large: show anyway

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