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Party shutdown

Post by BakedSanta » Wed May 18, 2016 11:48 am

Its a warm, sunny day in Brikville, and the party animals are doing what they do best: Partying!
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Killer croc is a bit too turnt
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Everyone's enjoying themselves in the frat house
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A swimmer is shooting a video
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Mr. Claus observes everything from his perch
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The pizza delivery bloke is trying to score
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ALRIGHT BOYS, LETS SHUT THIS PARTY DOWN!!!!!
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Batlle start!
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The pizza delivery boy isn't having any of the police's rubbish. He clambers onto the table and takes aim with his antique rifle
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The vintage weapon is suprisingly effective, and kills an officer
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The swimmer takes off as soon as she hears gunfire
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No one can hear the shots in the frat house over the thumping EDM music
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Mr. Claus decides to join in, and hops down from his perch to stare down the attackers
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As does multiple visage
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This college student fires his glock, but it jams
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Mr. Claus attempted to lob his chicken leg at the police, but succumbed to temptation and ate it, which subsequently gave him chicken fatigue. He decides to sit down until he is rested.
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The police sniper attempts a feat, lines up his shot...
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And kills the swimmer and the redcoat with one .50 cal bullet
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This cop turns to shoot at the pizza boy that shot his colleague
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He succeeds, and the boy's dead body tumbles from the roof of the hotel
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This policewoman attempts to heal the shot officer, but fails and he bleeds out.
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Another officer moves up and fails to shoot anything
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The party animals in the frat house finally hear the shots and join the battle. I don't know why this pic is orientated weirdly.
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Glock bloke shoots the officer that tried to shoot him
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Oblivious to the raging battle, Max decides to 50 50 the bus shelter on his skateboard
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Multiple visage attempts to shoot, but his revolver explodes, taking his hand with it.
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Batman sets his sights on the policewoman, and takes her out with a batarang
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Noticing the mounting losses, this officer radios for SCO19 backup, but fails and screams a lot, not communicating his needs
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But he successfully blows the top of batman's head off with his MP7
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The fireman falls prey to sniper fire
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He attempts to shoot again, but instead drops his rifle, as his last ally is killed
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He is captured by the party animals, but they quickly decide what to do with him.
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PARTAYYY!!!!
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So yeah, thats my first batrep, hope you enjoyed it and constructive critiscism is always appreciated.
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Re: Party shutdown

Post by RedRover » Wed May 18, 2016 11:52 am

Police brutality at its finest

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Re: Party shutdown

Post by BakedSanta » Wed May 18, 2016 12:01 pm

RedRover wrote:Police brutality at its finest
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Re: Party shutdown

Post by Zupponn » Wed May 18, 2016 6:07 pm

The only thing I'd recommend is to put spaces between every picture/caption combo. It makes it easier to read.
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Re: Party shutdown

Post by Half-Moon Molly » Thu May 26, 2016 2:16 pm

Cool battle dude! Do moar battles in the future!!!
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Re: Party shutdown

Post by TastySkippy123 » Sat May 28, 2016 6:40 am

Nice one. Those cops got their butts kicked! I guess thats what happens when party poopers stop a party.

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